I am trying hard here. So, I guess I have to reexamine my grammar skills. People who are complaining about my novel. Please stop. I get it. You have to understand this is my first ever novel which I have written in English. I don't understand some mechanics that writers should use. Because of this I have to take a rest today and check other authors novels. But this doesn't mean I am giving up. I will try to improve my skills and I have to say it's much better than 1st chapters which was really disaster. I usually write essays in English but hey. Essays are totally different from the novel. Some people might know this. Novel is hard because I have to think plots and I don't have any proofreader or team that helps me. But I still write for you. I have read a lot of marvel fanfiction. Most of them are disappointing. Authors selfishly killed off the main characters and make female heroes to bitches. Look at Thanos and black orders. They write them off like offshoot guys. They supposed to be one of last bosses. Also the nationalism. Please wow. Most of the authors are extreme nationalists. I hate that. You can advertise your country but you can't make them number one. All cultures are equal. That's why I am writing my novel with no Chinese focus and American justice. I know my grammar is terrible but I am trying to learn about the novel writing. Please go with me guys. If you are complaining about it why don't you give an advice. I don't know where did I make mistakes or where to put punctuation. I am trying make it easy but it turns out I am mistaken. It's not that I am sad about it. I am just lonely here. No helps at all, mechanical proofreader said it's alright and I publish my chapter. Then you guys don't say anything about mistakes. You just say the grammar is terrible. You have to understand I am writing for free. I don't have any money for a team. I don't have money for any premium proofreader. I use free account and try to check the grammar. If you help me that would be great.
Lastly thank you for supporting me. Especially my loyal readers. I express my deepest gratitude. Love you guys.