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Pretty Far Out There...

🇺🇸Ash_of_Miller
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(Message to RoyalRoad staff: I'm posting this on RoyalRoad.com under the account Randomguy516 (https://www.royalroad.com/profile/96335).) Okay... so, basically, the general idea I'm going for here is... uhm... God (in this fantasty world) represents the power of absolute authority. He basically behaves like many authoritarian leaders, but on a global scale and to the point where he can literally read your thoughts. The only thing stopping him from puppeting the entire planet is the fact that he is kind of clumsy/overpowered and ends up just breaking things. Because of this, he must select a "hero" to act on his behalf, but he's having trouble finding one. The Devil embodies a more... chaotic philosophy. He believes that order/structure is unnatural--basically slavery to any free-minded creature (like humans, angels, demons, etc). He is unable to traverse Earth (er... alternate Earth) personally for fear of God finding and attacking him. Instead, he uses agents--demons or humans who sell their souls to him--to basically overthrow establishments dedicated to God. Because the current world is a theocratic regime... this basically means he sends agents to upturn society. Neither deity necessarily values any life other than their own... they see humans kind of how might see them while reading this. You know, assuming I do a half-decent job, you get attached to maybe a couple, but they're mostly in the background and you don't really care if they die. For the most part, God and Satan just sort of force their own philosophies onto humans while trying to prove to each other than one is superior. In any case, I hope you enjoy it. If not, that's fine (obviously), nothing is for everyone, and I'm not exactly a world-class author. This is just a fun idea. Don't expect regular updates... I have a job, college, and girlfriend to think about, so I don't know when I'll even have time for this.
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Chapter 1 - Setting

The sun hung just off-center of the pale blue sky, beating down on the rough, dehydrated landscape. From the finely ground dirt protruded a large, cylindrical stake, and tied to it was a fairly young man--barely into his twenties at first glance. Air wheezed past his cracked lips and into his dried throat with each painful rising of his malnourished chest, but his expression seemed almost at ease.

"Why is it…" the man began, hesitating a moment to clear his voice, "Why is it that… when a king taxes his people into poverty just to build an army and expand his kingdom… he is revered… but when ONE peasant makes off with a single piece of silverware so he can eat…"

"It's not my decision. Both of us know the law and the consequences for breaking it. I am here to enforce the order it protects." A burly, aged man dressed in a thin, cloth-like armor interjected. "I don't pretend like it's fair…" He reached down to a stack of dried reeds and twigs, lifting the large stack by it's bindings with little effort and dropping it at the feet of the restrained man. "...But order comes at a cost. Laws are vital to any society, and violation of this is an act against everyone involved."

The older man holds up his index finger, his face strained as it sputters and sparks for a moment before igniting with a small flame. "Damn. Getting old." He mumbles.

"I'd rather burn than starve. That's the choice I had to make thanks to these laws which you enforce." The young man spat, clearly irked by what the other had said, "And I'm not the only one. I hope you remember that when you hear the condemned children screaming as your flames lick their heels."

There was a long moment of silence as the older man slowly ignited the brush, his unsteady finger disintegrating some of the smaller fibers before the wood began to catch.

"Everything comes with a cost. I can't change that."

The condemned man's face relaxed, returning to its previous serenity, "No… this was your choice. You'd rather light the fire than be burned by it."