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Chapter 1 - God?

First Chapter of the First Novel. Enjoy :D

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Everything is dark... But, it feels warm and cozy here... i'll just enjoy this feeling.

"Ooh.. what have we here, a special soul. it seems you already waking up and can think of yourself." someone said.

"Huh!?... whose voice is that? i can't see you, it's dark here." i got a little bit surprised.

"It's dark because you're in your mother's womb. I know you have so many questions, so ask away" the voice said.

"Why?" i asked

"Why you're in the womb and why i can talk to you? the voice asked. "Yes, why?" this all confuse me.

"You're an embryo, a 3 months old embryo and it's the time where a soul will automatically put into an embryo, i'm talking about human race, animals have different timeline. So far you still understand of what i said right?"

"Nn" i 'nodded'.

"As for why i can talk to you, I'm God. I'm here to make a contract with you. You can rest easy, i do this to every human. it's just a formality."

"But, what kind of contract is it?"

"Basically, You swear that i'm your only god, Your belief and faith is only for me, and won't search for any other, tch, as if there is any other god anyway"

"Why the contract then?"

"It's a bet, but i can't say it can be called a bet either. You see, the devil swore to me that they would mislead human as many as possible, it's a long story"

"Huh? why though? i don't think there's any relation between the devil and the contract, please do tell"

---Flashback---

Some time at heaven

"I have a beautiful place, but there's no one to talk here. I've created so many thing, but most of them are mindless creatures. it's time to create a new one who i can talk to"

"hmm... Let's see... some light, souls, knowledge, and order.... done"

"Your order my lord"

"From now on you all will be called angel and are my servants, each of you will have different job and always loyal to me"

"Everything for the Lord" all the angels said

Eons later

"It's boring here, i can talk to the angels, but most of them still prefer to do their own job rather than talking. Well, i created them with a specific order in mind. Should i create another one? I know it won't end well, but it's really boring here. let's just do it anyway."

"this time some fire, a soul and a knowledge, oh not to forget the free will.... done"

"Oooohhhh.... My Lord my one and only lord, what can i do for you?"

"From now on, you're called Iblis, you can do whatever you want as long as you're loyal and obey my order"

"Everything is for the Lord. Thank you for the name my lord, i really like the name" Iblis said. The way he looked at me reminds me of the way a chick look at their parents. So eager to follow and full of passion, really different with the Angel's empty eyes

"Let's have a talk" I said to Iblis. "of course my one and only lord" Iblis said with stars in his eyes.

Another eons later

"Iblis, what do you think about this place?"

"It is beautiful my lord. Really a fit place for a great being like you"

"I know, but it still bores me. That's why I'm gonna make another creature like you"

"What! my lord, You already have angels and me who you can talk to, is it not enough?" shocked of what i said

"No, it's not, you guys lack something" after i said this, this is the first time i saw a different look came from Iblis. Rage, but mostly sadness. The Angels still busy doing their own job, they don't really care about anything as long as they do what i order them to do even committing suicide.

"You're our creator, i'll be happy as long as i'll stay by your side" Iblis said lifelessly

"Sure. hmmm.... let's see.... some mud as the container, soul, free will and knowledge, done... a perfect creature who can think of themselves and can increase their own kind without my help, i name you Adam" I said happily

"Praise you my Lord" Adam said

"Perfect. Now, i want all of you, Angels and Iblis to kneel to my perfect creation, Adam the first human" I said

"Praise my lord for creating a perfect being called Adam" all the Angels said.

"Iblis, why don't you kneel?"

"Why my Lord? I don't think there's any reason for me to have to do that. I saw what he made of, we all saw what he made of, it's a disgusting mud, so disgusting i don't think even the angels want to be near it, there's no way will kneel to someone like him." Iblis said a little bit mad at me

"I just want you all to kneel to Adam"

"There has to be a good reason for me to do that, why my lord?"

"There's no reason really, now KNEEL" i command.

"I can't do that, there's no way i will do that, i was made by fire a great fire so hot that can melt anything and i'm better than him, why do i have to kneel to a disgusting mud!" Iblis scream with unwilling expression.

"You really won't obey me? you know what will happen right? Hell will be your new home" I'm mad, but i managed to stay calm after what Iblis said

"We're loyal to you, I'm loyal to you my lord, we did anything you ordered us to do, but i can't do it this time, I CAN'T. I don't care what will happen to me, but I swear to to i'll prove to you that i'm better than human, if i'm gonna go to hell then i'll bring as many of them as possible to hell, i swear to you." Iblis said while crying

"very well then, i wanna see if you can misled them, you'll be close with them from now on" I know this will happen, this will be interesting to see

---Flashback End---

#Embryo's POV

"let's just say it's just a child rebel their parent's wishes" god said

"that's still not an answer, well whatever, what do you mean by special soul?"

"That means you have an advantage, because you're a special soul, you're free from my contract's punishment. Basically, you got a free Heaven pass without having to do anything" god said

"Really, it's nice then"

"It is, be grateful to me" God said proudly. "Now sign the contract, even though it's useless to you"

"I Swear to You that You're My One and Only God and I Won't Search for Any Other God" i said.

"That's all, oh another note, you'll forget what happen here and only will remember after you died. Goodbye special child."

"Wait What!?" Darkness takes me again, i feel sleepy, i.....

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