Pen Protectors A Following (Review)
Hello it's been a while I hope you enjoyed A Following; it's on of the hardest arcs I think I ever wrote; one of my greatest fear fears is cults & it's hard to implement how cult leaders think but I think I did my best; a know suicide is a sensitive topic for everyone & I knew if I wanted to make this arc realistic I had to make it as dark as possible; I think I did a good job of that; I think Elohim exemplifies how cult leaders think one flaw I think I had was making him so physically unattractive I don't think people would will follow someone who is fat & doesn't groom themselves so I could have made him a lot more attractive; another thing I messed up on was the ending; it's rushed; I have to work on story development & taking my time I was gonna make " A Following " 20 chapters but I needed to finish this arc before it got dragged out so I just made it 18 chapters I hope that's not that bad for the next arc it will be 20 chapters & I will try my hardest to develop the story, again I hope you enjoyed "A following" & stay tuned
for my next work love y'all & thank you again "