Twoscal

In a world where portals to hostile worlds appear all over earth and humans have supernatural abilities, a world where power is the difference between life and death, Kai Osborn is powerless. Well, until a game-like system appears and unlocks an innate power he never knew he had.

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Hello, twoscal here. I've decided to start writing again as I am now in a more stable part of my life and have more time to continue a series without dropping it. I have experimented with re-writing previous chapters and would like to know what you all think! To that end, I will be posting two versions of each chapter, the original: the original, and the re-written one. if you could let me know in the comments which chapter you prefer and why that would mean a lot to me.


pretty dope, so far gives me solo leveling vibes but with the whole soul thing it also seems kind of wuxia. Eh I'll give it five stars it's at least a lot better then that vampire system books thats on the top of the charts. as long as this doesn't become one of those stupid level grinding series with no plot I think I'll enjoy it.

So far so good! Writing is of much higher quality than the majority of these series. I like that power isn't measured in stat points and is replaced by tiers which seem to be a somewhat looser description. My only complaint now is that there aren't enough chapters!

Hey! Author here.  Thanks for checking out my series! If you liked it, or hated it, or just found it mediocre, please leave a review telling me what I did right and what I can improve on. I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing. Twoscal out.


Ummmmm I'm giving my own series five stars just so it can reach a wider audience.

I’m really liking what I’ve read so far. The translation is perfect. I think the author might be a native English speaker? I like the setup and introduction and the first chapter was pretty intense. Definitely adding to my library 

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. 

A great concept of the story! The story has potential and the description of the story is also great! The synopsis is well-described. Good job! Keep up the good work!

I just started reading this story.  1- I don't know the update schedule so I gave it a neutral rating.  2- writing quality...I found that the author did not separate paragraphs very often.  English over all was decent enough that you could understand and actually picture what the author intended.  It did not have very many if at all punctuation errors so that's a plus.  Over all pretty good

A really interesting set up and the start of a world I want to know more about!  Great detail in the writing but the plot moves at a fast enough pace to keep me hooked, can’t wait for more!

The Soul Realm System

Table of contents

Volume 1 :Despair

Chapter 1 - Read this before the first chapter!