TheyDreamer

a story of a Pirate Captain that is Slime. . .

. . .in a world of One Piece


*This is purely and entirely fan-fic only and the Author does not own the covered photo*

Japan

NOTE: whenever you review, Frist read at least 10 chap....
Just don't review after reading just one fucking chapter, that too a prologue... just like some fucking dumb kid...
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anyway this fan- fic is very much originality... have its own original plot...
which most readers want ....

I can't rate it right now coz I only read the prologue... but the concept of transmigration and becoming someone or something isn't new.... but oh boy!!! oh boy!!!! transmigrating and becoming a DF is something new to me I guess
keep it up author-san
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Well the concept of being a devil fruit is new and refreshing. But it feels and reads like a google translated fanfiction. Nothing against it, but even beginner level english consists of more verbs than this mash of nouns. It becommes unbearable quickly with you just deciphering and analysing every paragraph to understand what the author means.

But if the concept onteresrs you...


Sigh the story seems intersting and all but how am i supposed to rewd if i have to think what every sentance means before continuing, it irritating but since its still readable i shall give a 4 ;)

call me back, when grammer and ur narrative style improves...
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i like the concept of this as I love the slime abilities and hopefully, u can use them to the best of their abilities, I am a bit confused with the visions at the beginning of the marines and others.
is the slime from the manga somehow transported to the one-piece world and at the same time an old soul from our earth is transported? 
is the slime reincarnated into a fruit with its memories?

this story had potential but was ruined because the mc decided instead of training lets just grab a few poeple and go fight instead of trying to make himself strong he made a "party" so stupid

One Piece and the Smile Slime Pirate [Rework]