Hello!
I realized that there are MANY things that need Improvement in "SMO".
So, to make things more simple for me, I decided that this story will be the "Rough Draft" for the "Polished" version that I might make when this version of the series is finished.
So, I want to encourage those who see some errors, and places that I can improve, to tell me about those improvements so that I can release a hopefully clean and completely polished SMO Webnovel.
I thank you for reading, and please continue to read.
There may be some confusion with parts of the games mechanics, as well as the background characters that practically don't exist, but I ensure you that there will be improvement.
For now though, I leave you with a few explanations...
[HP ; Health Points]
[For every Point in "End", 10 Max HP will be added to the player]
[Other Players in SMO]
[It may not seem like they're there, but they are. I accidentally forgot to put in some form of description for more of the Surroundings and Characters]
[Wacky Stat System]
[To be honest, I could have been smarter in how the system works. I could have made it so that new players have 1000 Points instead of 100, since every Level gives 5 Stat Points. There are also some Skills that depend on the Stats, but to be honest, even I feel that "101 Agi" shouldn't instantly give 2 Skills. It always seemed better in my head]
*Fixed*
[Overly Obvious Bullies]
[Okay, I gotta admit that the Bullies were a little excessive, since they seem to have absolutely 0 Supervision from other Adults, as well as other Bystanders. Those also seemed better in my head]
[My Problem with "Author's Note]
[In truth, I was gonna use it, but it didn't seem to save, so I used the ends of the Chapters instead. Sorry about that. I'll try to see if I can somehow fix that]
And that should be it.
I just want you to know that I will still continue to make SMO as it is right now.
I will create a Polished Version after a while, so that the Story and Atmosphere of SMO can be more than what it lacks right now.
As I make these, please note anything that seems weird or makes no sence and comment about it. I'll try to fix anything that I can.
I will make a differeny "Rough Draft" on Paper or an Online Document to see if I can make SMO better than what it is now.
For now though, I'll continue forwards in what could be a good or bad story.
Thank you for Reading!