Hi this is my first book ever so please tell me what i can improve on and if you want me to make another part.
Marinette is walking in the rain trying to find the address when she finds it she sees it is a very odd looking Manchin.
At first sight she thought it looked kind of creepy but diced to give it a chance even though she felt like it was haunted by the look of it.
She was not too far off from that it was the house of vampires.
When marinette rang the door bell she felt a shiver up her spine because the door opened by it's self so she walked in and was saying hello is anyone here no one answered but she stumbled upon a sleeping blond boy but she noticed that he was not breathing so she checked to see if his hart was still beating she could not hear it.
As she was about to call 911 gabriel agrest showed up and said he would show her where she was staying she asked about the sleeping boy he said not to worry about him and he was fine.
After he showed her her room she moved in and went to bed.
So in this story vampires only need to sleep 2 or 3 times a month depending on how much blood they have had.