Fate_go_Player

A man dies due stupidity of others and reincarnates as a monster


" mm.. Where am I?"


" WHAT THE HECK IS A leviathan" 


System: " leviathan:the most ancient, terrible, terrifying, abominable, cold, ruthless, and gluttonous of all monsters some of the bigger ones of the species are capable of swallowing a whole mountain in one chomp.

This species is thought to be extinct" 


Join him on his journey to... 


Well he has no goal really...


Note: I don't own the picture

And I... well.... the worst that can hapen is me flaming around a little but on the bright side... I am just some random dude from the internet with an uneducated opinion and no idea how properly written stories look. So please dont take my critic to heart too much if I write one because it is probably worse than anything you ever produce.

They maybe children involved in the plot in the future but nothing romantic.
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So no, no lolis

As long as there ain't no lolis, I'll be the best feedbacker you've ever had...change your life I will

This is my first time writing anything I just doing this on a whim please tell me your honest opinion ( Ps. I have a delicate heart to please be nice in you criticism)


I enjoy it so far and it as a lot of potential so give it a read you won’t be disappointed.                                                                                                

                                                    

it's great like this song 
🎵Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?🎶
I gunted them, and they were mine.What 🎵kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,🎶
And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?🎵
🎶Gunter, there were tears there.🎶
If you gunted them, would you even care?🎵Gunter, do you even love me?🎵

The mc has zero self respect and without a little pride.Well people can make him do house cleaning and washing their underwear, while he was demon king.Godess of life literally just made his entire race extinct, with schemes.

What did he do, nothing .Not even planning to do  any harm to her, who is hunting him for the time he was born. 


Just wow!!!

A fun read, interesting and rational mc, definitely looking forward to more of it, a wonderful piece of work by the author, definitely in my top recommendations

not gonna bother. author whines a lot. the story is bland and the MC does a 180 in personality with 0 reason or growth. only mousy is worthy.

I had hope for this novel but because of the degenerates who love harem(Shit stains of the world) this novel was tainted. I have fully given up hope on this novel it was good until chap 1- 119 until this author put out a pole for harem or not, bullshit. Complete and utter bullshit I hope your happy author, with your decision.

 He asks a lot of unnecessary questions that he already knows. He asks and asks and asks as if he was born yesterday and did not train and goes through the fights of life and death as if he is not from another world and as if he is not a strong being.  For half the story, he is supposed to be a cold character, few words and a lot of listening in front of the gods, who acts like an idiot, why don't you kill me, why don't you tell the rest of my whereabouts, how you found me, how, how, and he gives a detailed explanation of any question asked to him as if he was a criminal arrested without talking about his strength that we didn't see what's the point of  A pen if you can't write what's the use of strength if you're afraid of being lost

The book honestly is really good till chapter 40-ish after which MC enters the outside world fr. The story is well written before that but after that, the story devolves into a mess of bad writing, poorly done dialogue, and incredibly awful humor. Read at your own risk.

Its good, love the monster choice, but its harem... So if your like me and dont like harems, be forewarned, otherwise its a good premise with okay grammar and a **** ton of spacing so chapters end up being rather short even if they look long

To be honest, in the beginning I assumed this was gonna die early on, but boy was I wrong. The writing quality was quite low in the first arc, but bam, out of no where it gets 10x better.  Enjoying this a lot more than I thought. No annoying system but equals. Super OP but still uses his brain. 

Enjoyed more than I expected, hopefully this keeps up :)

The entirety of the story is well thought and i truly find it interesting and entertaining to read 100/100 recomended. READ IT! READ IT! READ IT!

The story is good till chapter 40. I dropped cause he got nerfed and his character is trash, allway yelling or complaining. 
Filling Word count...

Here's my overall opinion on the novel.

Writing quality: There are quite a lot of spelling mistakes. They're mostly missing letters and additional letters. The author has a tendency to add a lot of spacing between sentences (As in seperation between paragraphs, not spaces between words and such) but they get rid of it around 40 chapters in and it's not necessarily unimmersive. And despite what I will say in Story Development, the author is good at keeping the reader entertained. Even if most of his jokes fall flat. I have to say, my biggest problem that I have with the story is that the author does several pretty generic and aggravating cliche's, but because of the novels pacing they will be done in at most a few pages.

Story development: I have to say that this might be the only reason I stayed. The pacing of the story is a bit fast but that works in its favor because whenever there was a cliche that annoyed me, it would be done in a 2-4 pages with maybe a small reappearance later. If you run into something you dont like, I recommend skimming by quickly. The overall story is enjoyable but it would suck if it was ruined because of something you didn't like. About the MC himself? If you like a story with a mc who overcomes obstacles to become stronger... hehehe. Not a thing here buddy, Not. At. All. I think he reaches his peak strength at like chapter 40 or so. And then he just refines his powers.

Character Designs: What I'll refer to as the NPC's aren't overly unique and eye catching in their personality, but the conversations and such flow well together making the talks understandable and at the least, not boring.

World Background: Its nothing detailed like Eragon or The Land (actual published novels) obviously but that means it doesn't bore you with the nitty gritty so I guess that's a plus.

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this is good but the mc is like a spoiled brat so annoying he always blames what is wrong with the system and don't fucking want to calm the **** out always crying, whining.. even if this is comedy it's just a bit annoying type mc but keep it up its good just have patience

Mc gets nerfed

I am the exp of my sword.
webnovel is my body, and power stones are my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless reviews.
unknown to death, nor known to life.
have withstood pain to create many reviews.
Yet, those eyes will never read something good.

So, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works!

The story in the first volume started out fun, then in the second the nerf came and it took away the fun a bit and then I started to get bored.


Mc psikopat membantai keluarga tumbuhan yang tak bersalah,. Vd sfbwtbwtbsf sf w

















































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this was a completely brilliant novel I absolutely loved it the only thing that I wish was that it was longer novel or they would make a sequel to this novel it was brilliantly written I love the characters I love the build up of the story The emotional scenes the hardships friendships and everything I especially like what they did with the goddesses fractured soul it was brilliant well made and I loved it I would recommend this novel to any reader out there

Reincarnated as leviathan

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Hello