This marks my first venture into writing, and I welcome your valuable feedback. If you came across any flaws or errors in the story, please do point them out. I'm in the process of refining and editing the narrative repetadly until I feel ok. Your patience and undersranding are much appreciated. I hope you find the journey enjoyable, and your insights will undoubtly contribute to its improvment.
Thank you for your support.
Niva.