Panel 1: Legacy walks in the kitchen while Mom is making breakfast.
Mom: Hey, birthday boy! How's my Stinky feeling?
Legacy: Really, mom? Am I a little too old to be called that now?
Panel 2: Legacy takes a seat at the kitchen. Close up of Mom giving legacy a kiss.
Mom: It doesn't matter how old you are, I'll still call you my Stinky even if you're 50.
Panel 3: Mom is walking back to the stove while legacy's face is full of excitement. A dark figure is looming behind legacy.
Mom: I made your favorite! Bacon pancakes with hash browns!"
Panel 4: The looming shadow gets closer behind legacy without him knowing.
Rodney: Got cha, stink!
Panel 5: Rodney surprise attacks legacy with punches.
Rodney: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5!
Legacy: Ahhh! Stop it!!
Mom: Rodney, leave your brother alone.
Panel 6: Rodney stops punching Legacy.
Legacy: Yea! Leave me alone, hot breath!
Rodney: Come on. It's his birthday! I do this every year!
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Panel 1: Front view of mother cooking with a devilish look on her face while Legacy has a frightening look in the background.
Mom: I know. Just finish the rest after he eats.
Legacy: WHAT!?!? NO! WAIT!
Panel 2: Close up of Rodney whispering in Legacy's ear which leads Legacy to look even more frightened.
Rodney: Catch ya later, Stinky.
Panel 3: Legacy is eating breakfast while he starts to narrate.
Legacy narrates: I'm legacy. I just turned 13 and I live a kinda normal life. Well, I think I do. Here's why.
Panel 4: After breakfast, Rodney continues his birthday punches. Legacy is crying in pain while Mom sits back and laughs. Legacy continues to narrate.
Legacy narrates: You probably think that guy is my father because he looks damn near 30 years old. Well, he is my annoying older brother, Rodney. He claims he gets all the hoes, but I don't see no hoes..
Rodney: 6, 7, 8, 9, 10!
Legacy: I don't know what's worse! OUCH! Your punches or that breathe! OUCH OUCH!
Legacy: Did you even brush your teeth?
Panel 5: Close up of Mom laughing.
Legacy narrates: That's my mom. Isn't she beautiful? She's the best. Always makes us feel so loved and I wouldn't trade her for the world. Like I said, normal life, right? Well...
Panel 6: Flashback of Legacy doing school work at home.
Legacy narrates: My brother and I have been homeschooled our whole lives because mom doesn't trust public schooling. She says it's making kids dumb and turning them into perfect robot workers for huge Corps to use. She especially doesn't trust the government, but that's a story for another day.
Panel 7: Flashback of Mom flipping legacy to the ground.
Legacy narrates: My mom's the best fighter, too. She taught me and my brother everything we know about it and has never lost a sparring match to either of us . My mom could beat your mom's ass any day of the week.
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Panel 1: Legacy and his family at a junkyard, later on that evening
Legacy narrates:Here is where it gets kinda crazy. Where I live, there are people called Users who are able to control different elements of the earth. Everyone in my family can control electricity. Pretty dope, right? It runs strong in my family. Mom has always been around to help us train on how to control and increase our powers.
Panel 2: Mom and Rodney are watching Legacy.
Mom: Concentrate, Legacy. Focus your energy.
Legacy: Yea, yea. I know, mom. That's what I'm trying to do! It's not working.
Panel 3: Legacy is squatting with his left arm in front of him, with a serious face.
Rodney: You look like you're constipated.
Panel 4: Legacy gets in Rodney's face.
Legacy: Shut up! Your life is constipated!
Rodney: That makes no sense
Mother: Rodney, quite! Legacy, just focus! You're 13 and you still don't have your first God Armor. Your brother was 12 when he finally got his.
Panel 5: Legacy shrugs it off.
Legacy: Well, maybe it's not my time yet. I'm a late bloomer. Plus, it's my birthday. It's hard to concentrate on the most important day of the year.
Panel 6: Mom does a face balm.
Mom: *sighs* Ok, fine. Before we head back home though, lightning race? Let's see if 13 year old Stinky can actually win one.
Legacy: MOM! You know I hate that name!
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Panel 1: Mom has a devious look on her face. Legacy's face full of excitement. Rodney with a smirk on his face.
Mom: Then win this race and I'll never call you Stinky again.
Legacy: Deal!
Rodney: Stinky it is.
Panel 2: At the starting line, Mom and Rodney both put on their God Armor (located on their arms). Legacy narrates how the game is played.
Legacy narrates: A lightning race has always been a family tradition. What makes this game so special is that we can use our electrical powers to help us win. Electricity and lightning, get it? The point of the game is to be the first one to grab the flag.I always lose, but that's ok. I got a good feeling about this one. After all, it is my birthday!
Legacy: Hey, no fair!
Rodney: Hey, aren't you 13? Cause you're crying like your 12.
Panel 4: The whole family stands at a starting line.
Mom: On your mark, get set…
Legacy: Oh no, uh uh! My birthday, my count.
Panel 5: The whole family in their ready stance.
Legacy: On your mark, get set…
Rodney: Don't cheat again.
Panel 6: Legacy starts running.
Panel 7: Mother and Rodney notices.
Both yell: LEGACY!!!
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Panel 1: Legacy is in the lead with Mom and Rodney behind him.
Legacy says to self: I'm gonna win! I'm gonna finally win! My very first win and no more Stinky!!
Rodney and Mom: CHEATER!!!
Panel 2: Legacy gets a can thrown at his head.
Legacy says to self: I'm a grown 13 year-
Panel 3: he stumbles just enough to let Rodney and Mom pass him.
Rodney: Nice shot, mom!
Mom: 37 and I still got it! Hot damn!
Panel 4: Racing continues. Legacy desperately tries to catch up.
Legacy: What the heck, Mom! That hurt!
Mom: Life hurts! Now get up and keep trying. Love you!
Panel: 5 Rodney trips mom and moves ahead of her.
Panel 6: Mom reaches out and grabs Rodney's leg at the last moment
Mom: Not so fast!
Panel 7: Rodney falls face first in a pile full of mud.
Rodney: Ugh!
Panel 8: Mom sticks Rodney's face deeper into the mud.
Mom: Love you, bye!
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Panel 1: Legacy still trailing behind.
Legacy says to self: Shit, How am I gonna catch up now? Think! I could try to focus all my electrical energy into my legs to give me a quick boost. A Sonic Boom!
Panel 2: Different view of Legacy losing.
Legacy says to self: I may not be able to control it very well, but I could at least aim where I wanna go. I've only got 1 shot at this. Mom hasn't really trained me how to do this yet, but here goes nothing!
Panel 3: Legacy's legs begin to glow and an aura of electricity surrounds his legs.
Legacy: SONIC!!!!
Panel 4: Mom looks over her shoulder.
Mom says to self: Someone's getting desperate. He is going to be tired as hell after this little stunt.. Make it count, Stinky.
Panel 5: Legacy shoots off faster than expected.
Legacy: BOOM!
Panel 6: Within seconds, he is already passing Rodney.
Rodney: No way!
Panel 7: Legacy passes up mom.
Legacy says to self: Oh my God! I just passed up mom! I'm going to win! No more Stinky! No more fucking STINKY!!!!
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Panel 1: Legacy face full of excitement as he desperately stretches out his arm to the flag.
Legacy: few more steps!
Panel 2: Mom comes in at the last minutes and grabs the flag. this time she has her arms and legs god armor on.
Mom: So close, Stinky
Legacy: What!?
Panel 4: legacy skips on the ground and crashes in a pile of junk.
Legacy: Oh, shit! Too much power! NOT! FAIR!
panel 5: Legacy is laying in a pile of junk while Mom is celebrating and Rodney looks disappointed.
Mom: Curse like that again and imma put soup in your mouth!
Legacy: Sorry.. The Birthday boy is gonna need help walking home now.
Rodney: I actually thought you had something there. What a loser.
Legacy: Atleast I didnt get last place.
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Panel 1: Family walks up to a complex entrance. Mom carrying legacy on her back.
Family: Hey, Mrs. Jackson.
Panel 2: Mrs. Jackson, cheerful.
Mrs. Jackson: Hey everyone! Woo! There goes the birthday boy. I made your favorite cake. It's sitting in your refrigerator .
Legacy: Tres Leches!?
Mrs. jackson: You know it, honey!
Panel 3: Rodney and legacy rush up the stairs. Mom face palms.
Rodney: First dibs!
Legacy: Na uh! It's my cake, hot breath!
Mom: Boys! Wait! *sighs* What am I going to do with them?
Mrs. Jackson: *laughs* Reminds me of my husband and boy. Always fighting over the last piece of my pumpkin pie, even though I always had a second one ready.
Panel 4: mom sits next to Mrs. Jackson and continue to talk
Mom: I would've never carried him home if I knew he could move like that!
Mrs. Jackson: Well, that's the power of my cakes, honey.
Mother: Little brat. Anyways, what are you doing out here so late?
Mrs. Jackson: Keeping an eye out for those bitch ass government people.
Panel 5: Mrs. Jackson Pulls out a shotgun
Mrs. Jackson: And ain't no bitch ass, uncle sam government official going to take Maria Jackson outta her home!
Mom: Whoa! Calm down! As long as I'm here, no one is taking our home.
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Panel 1: Mom and Mrs. Jackson look at the surrounding abandoned buildings.
Mrs. Jackson: Just sayin'. We're the last ones left around this part of town. They keep pushing us project people further south. Ya know, they want us out of this house so they can use the neighborhood for "mixed income living". We all know that's just another way of saying the rich white people want to take over and live here.
Mom: Ain't that the sad truth.
Mrs. Jackson: The Projects used to be full of life. Now it's all empty and dead. It's a cemetery full of faint memories of what used to be.
Mom: Yea, I remember the good ol' days. How about you let me walk you home?
Panel 2: Mother and Mrs. Jackson enter the house. In the distance you see a shadowy figure watching them.
Panel 3: Close up of Moms face yelling.
Mom: You better not have touched that cake!
Panel 4: Rodney and Legacy are sitting at the table. Legacy has a mouth full of cake.
Legacy: Sorry.
Rodney: I told him to wait.
Panel 5: legacy looks at rodney
Legacy: LIAR!
Panel 5: an explosion hits their home knocking them all back.
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Panel 1: as the family tries to recover from the blast, they hear someone yelling outside.
male assassin: Come out, Martha! Or should I say, LILI BLAZE!
Panel 2: Fireballs hitting the apartment complex.
Panel 3: everybody gets up.
Mom: You two go check and make sure Mrs. Jackson is safe. I'll deal with this asshole!
Panel 4: close up of Rodney's face.
Rodney: Mom, watch out!
Panel 5: mom blocks a punch from a female assassin.
Panel 6: mom counter punches the female assassin in her chest.
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Panel 1: the female assassin gets up and Rodney goes in front of mom.
Rodney: Don't worry, I'll handle her. Go deal with the one outside. Legacy, go check on Mrs. Jackson.
Panel 2: Rodney does a sweep kick
Panel 3: Female assassin dodges the low kick by doing a jumping cartwheel, activates foot and shin lava god armor.
Panel 4: Rodney activates both arms god armor and blocks the assassin's lava god armor kick.
Rodney: What the hell? You're a user?
Panel 5: A fury of punches and blocks by Rodney and the female assassin.
Rodney says to self: She's fast and accurate, definitely a trained fighter. Can't let my guard down. Not even for a second.
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Panel 1: mom goes to a fighting stance while the male assassin is across from her holding fire balls.
Mom: You didn't have to put my family in danger to get my attention, asshole!
Male assassin: Aw, so selfless. But right now you need to worry about yourself. Somebody really wants you dead.
Panel 2: Mom smirks
Mom: Well, they're gonna need a refund.
Panel 3: The Male assassin pushes out an aurora of fire.
Panel 4: Lili puts on her legs and arms god armor to block the blast.
Panel 5: A skyview of the neighborhood on fire
Panel 6: the male assassin chargers with full god armor.
Male assassin: We'll see about that!
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Panel 1: Mom dodges his punch
Male assassin: I'm expecting a good fight, gorgeous. I know the leader of the Valkyrie Resistance.
Panel 3: Mom steps back in shock.
Mom: How do you know THAT? How did you find me?
Male assassin: I have my ways.
Panel 4: Mom does a fake knee, to get the assassin to low guard.
Mom: You want a fight?
Panel 5: Mom connects a super man punch.
Mom: I'll give you a fucking fight.
Panel 6: sends him flying through a building.
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Panel 1: Legacy and Mrs. Jackson came out of the burning building.
Legacy: Mom, we're ok!
Mom: Thank God!!
Panel 2: Female assassin busts out from the second floor window.
Panel 3: female assassin sweep kicks legacy
Panel 4: Mrs. jackson tries to shoot but the female assassin grabs the tip of the gun with her god armor and blocks the it
Panel 5: with her opposite hand she melts Mrs. Jackson's face off.
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Panel 1: legacy punches the female assassin with his god armor.
Panel 2: she gets knocked back into a car. making a big dent.
panel 3: she gets up and activates her god armor (both forearms and lower legs)
Female assassin: No one punches me like that and escapes with their life.
Legacy: Where's my brother?
Female assassin: Probably burning alive.
panel 4: Mom tries to run to Legacy.
Mom: Legacy, i'm coming!
Panel 5: Mom gets hit in the back with a fireball.
Panel 6: male assassin comes out from the rubble. Mom is on her knees with her back burnt.
Male assassin: you really need to worry about yourself.
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Panel 1: Mom uses sonic booms to punch and kick the Male assassin from different angles to confuse him
Panel 2: Mom jumps up in mid air
Mom: Got you now!
Panel 3: Mom does a spinning roundhouse kick that sends him flying.
Panel 4: The Male assassin catches her leg.
Male assassin: Is that seriously the hardest you can hit? That's disappointing.
Panel 5: Male assassin slam throws her
Male assassin: I'll show you how to really hit!
Panel 6: body bounces but she recovers on her feet.
Panel 7: Male assassin starts to overwhelm Mom with of punches. All she can do is block.
Male assassin: You're getting tired and weak! I can see it!
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Panel 1: While Mom blocks, part of her God armor starts to crack.
Mom says to self: No...my armor is getting weak
Panel 2: Close up of Moms bloody face.
Mom to self: I haven't gotten in a fight this intense in a long time. He can tell I'm tired, but I can't give up now. What about Legacy? What about Rodney?.
Panel 3: Male assassin does a fire blast.
Male assassin: Your armor is giving out and you're getting slower. How long are you going to keep this up? Death is the only outcome and you're just prolonging it.
Panel 4: Mom blocks it but gets her guard knocked off.
Mom says to self: Shit, I'm wide open.
Panel 5: Male assassin punches mom in the face and burns half of her face.
Panel 6: Mom throws a punch but the Male assassin grabs her wrist in mid punch.
Male assassin: You're lucky you're a User. Your head would have been clean off if you were a normal human.
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Panel 1: Male assassin crushes her god armor with a squeeze. Now his fire armor is burning away at her skin. Lili screams in pain.
Male assassin: You put up a good fight, but now it's time to collect.
Panel 2: Mom tries to throw a punch with the opposite hand.
Mom: I'm not done yet!
Panel 3: Male assassin catches the punch and crushes her armor. Mom screams in more pain.
Male assassin: So predictable. I must admit, you do have heart though.
Panel 4: Male assassin knees Mom in the gut. Legacy screams in the background.
Male assassin: But heart won't save you!
Legacy: Mom!
Panel 5: Legacy starts to panic.
Legacy says to self: Moms in trouble! What do I do? What CAN I do?
Legacy says to self: Mom needs my help but I can't do that without getting past this girl. But how? Could I even stop him if I did? I don't know what to do!
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Panel 1: Male assassin picks mom up with one hand while she screams in pain.
Male assassin: Any last words, Lili?
Mom: S-stinky w-w-whatever you do, don't try to s-save me.
Panel 2: Legacy filled with confusion.
Legacy: What? Why!? I'm gonna save you mom! Just give me a minute!
Panel 3: With Moms face Bloody and burnt, she barely has the strength to speak.
Mom: Save yourself! S-saving me will just g-get you k-k-killed. I tried so hard for my past not to come back and haunt our family. I got to witness your first God armor. I'm s-so proud of you! You're a strong man.
Panel 4: tears start to pour down.
Legacy: What? What are you talking about? Why are you talking like this?!
Panel 5: Mom continues her speech.
Male assassin: Your mom's gonna die, kid. Ain't nothing she can do to stop it! All you can do is watch!
Mom: I'm sorry I won't see you grow up. Remember, I'll always be in your heart, pushing you. I want you to always remember, YOU'RE A BLAZE!
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splash page: Male assassin Punches Mom through her stomach. Blood pouring out of her
Mom: NOW, LEGACY BLAZE. RUN!
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