Chapter 16 - Question for all readers

Hey everyone I as many of you know I have been focusing on my other fan fic but now that I think about it I need your guys / girls opinions on this are you happy with the way the story has been going so far if so I'll continue this after I'm satisfied with my other fan fic if many of you think in some way shape or form other than grammar I should change I might rewrite it please comment about this and thanks for everything I won't drop this the worst is I rewrite it ok also thanks for the stones I know I don't ask for them but to those that give me them on any of my fan fics I just want to say thank you heck I don't even know what they do but still thanks anyways cya my readers until my next chap