I think i'll just end the story. I feel as if even if it gets a bunch of views, it's kinda dead isn't it? with rarely any updates or anything. I also had a lot of bad grammar and i was using my phone to write the story. I am so sorry and i apologize. It was an unplanned story. I can keep working on it if anybody says they want me to. But again, quite dry and dead here. I also noticed that it's quite childish if i say so myself, the story in me head was way more detailed. And as you can see, the story got more better written by time and i was starting to better it. But i'll still keep it here since it is my first book. Maybe i can cringe at it sometime near in the future. - Love Hanin_gurl