PARAMETER

Strength : B

Endurance: B-

Agility: A+++

Mana: C/A+

Luck: D-

NP: B+/A+++

CLASS SKILLS

Mad enhancement: C

Precense concealment: C (B+ at night and A+ if at night with mist)

PERSONAL SKILLS

Mystic eyes of ??????: B

Murderer of the Misty Night: A

Mental polution: C

Information erasure: B

Surgical procedure: E

NOBLE PHANTASM

Maria the Ripper: Anti unit: C/A+++

The Mist: Barrier: B

~My Fair Lady~: Anti-fortress/Anti-unit : A+

CHANGES TO JACK

If you noticed changes to jack's parameters and noble phantasms including a completely new one those will be explained.

First off i also made a couple of changes to the original two np's to make them stronger, altrough i may have made maria a little bit op.

Ok ok explaining changes now.

Strength B/endurance B- and agility A+++ is mainly due to the changes i made to his lore adding to his power as a servant.

The variable Mana parameter is mainly due to the changes i made to his Mist np.

Now the mist is not only stronger but also absorbs prana to sustain itself but due to not having much of an upkeep besides the initial activation the extra goes straigth to Jack, it will be like doped up mustard gas to any normal human/Magus that goes into it on top of the prana stealing. Any servant with Magical resistance below B will recieve damage on top of lowered parameters and prana depletion, if they have Magical resistance B+ or higher they will only be affected by the prana stealing effect.

Now as for Maria the Ripper the main change is it's power, it's effect remains mainly the same with the damage dependic on the targets characteristics growing more in power until if all parameters are met its an almost guaranteed kill shot.

At it's most basic Maria works as an instant strike kind of skill using jack's knives where no matter his position if activated jack will move inside his target's guard with his knives already swinging.

Note that at this rank Maria can be blocked by an opponent with sufficient skill speed or instincts.

Maria's three parameters are:

The target must be female

It must be night

There must be mist

If only one parameter is met then Jack will be teleported into the targets blind spot with his attack midway to the target, but once again it can be dodged or blocked.

If two parameters are met then Jack will once again be teleported to target but his knives will be already making contact with them, this can only be dodged by an oponent with either a good enough eye of the mind/instinct of sheer reaction time and speed.

If all parameters are met the Maria will reverse causality and effect turning into a borderline guaranteed kill shot with Jack's cleavers appearing on his hands and the target being cut in half at the waist, the only way to survive it is if the target has skill preventing instant death, Ex rank luck or if the target is actually wider than Jack's cleavers are long.

~My Fair Lady~

Now this is something i made altrough for the name i was kinda inspired by jack the reaper from record of ragnarok.

This NP comes from the altered history i made, mainly Jack's death where he went down in a (literal) blaze of glory along with half of london and, you guessed it london bridge, giving origin to the song (yea i kinda bent history over my knee here) and his first public kill where many witnessed him piercing trough a man and the lighg post behind him with a single bare hand, both times he was heard singing a verse that would later be made into a song called "london bridge is falling down"

The NP has two methods of use and activation.

For the first use it will summon the blaze that consummed half a million londonites along with Jack.

It can either be a massive area of effect attack or a concentrated blast, and while it has great destructive power it's main drawback is that Jack must stay in place and draw on of his cleavers, after he does this he must simply say "London Bridge is Burning Down My Fair Lady".

For it's Anti-Unit effect Jack must sheathe his knives and walk towards the target while singing the first verse of "London Bridge is Falling Down".

While he is singing his target will not be able to react to his presence until he is right in front of them, at wich point Jack will launch an unarmed knife hand strike towards them wich ignores any defence, it can only be dodged and any attemp to counterattack will paralize the target in place.

This makes it quite deadly without previous knowledge of it since most oponents will automatically try to block or counterattack.

As for his mystic eyes i think you can guess what they are.

More knowledge of what he went up to when he was alive will be posted in future chapters.

I hoped to post chapter 2 but in the end decided to post his parameters.

On the matter of his class Jack is summoned kind of like seminaris with skills from two classes, his precence concealment is quite basic on normal circumstances but is quite good at night or in mist as i marked next to it.

The next chapter i post will be chapter 2.

Sneak peek: Our lovely little berserker will show why shota psychos are better than skeletor fap addicts.