Im looking over this story as a whole and Im thinking that this is not the kind of story I wanted. I wanted to write a goofy story that didnt make a lot of sense.

However, looking over the story, its just bad writing. I think what Im gonna do is discontinue this series and take some time to think of my next move.

While I consider this, feel free to check out my other story, Outrun City, I put a lot of effort into that and some support for it would be very nice. Please comment on my posts and give me criticism so I can learn and grow.

Sorry for the trouble. -Lel