i thought about it.
i am gonna stop writing this novel. More like re write it. i will make it more logical and all the thing about character depth and stuff.
i am gonna start writing from tomorrow and suspend the current novel. i will not be deleting these chapters but the new novels name will be civilization while this one will be civilization (suspended) .
Also there might be alot of plot changes and stuff. But the characters and some settings will be the same. Also the new novel will be a bit slow.
cya.