I died and was born into another world?!

Thank you for reading my very forst story that I have decided to put out in the world. I have written many story's but I have never put them out for fear that the stories that I put out would not be liked by anyone. I have been creating stories since I was a little girl. please tell me of any grammer mistakes and any ideas that would be great for this story to progress in. I really hope that all of you enjoy this story that I have finally decided to share with the world. I will let all of you know that I have been going through a hard time and this story is about a girl that I would love to be. My mother died in a horrible car accident and this is my only outlet for the pain and sadness I have been going through. please give this story a chance and let it grow into something that will be supportive for all the people out there that are going through a hard time and need something to take you out and give you a way to release any of the pain, sadness, anger, and bitterness that you may feel. Just know that you are loved and thank you for even giving this story a chance.