lost in ancient times

hello readers this is my first time writing a story . if I make a mistake please point it out in the comments so that I can correct it . I also hope you guys can help me to improve. my name is Anastacia and I decided to try and write this story because my teacher keeps telling me that I have a mind full of fantasy and that I should make use of it an become a writer. I also like reading and making scenarios up in my head, so here I'm giving writing a try . If the story turns out to be okay I promise to keep writing also English is not my first language but my favorite that is way I choose to write in English. so please be a little understanding