Brothers, don't stop the recommendation votes! Good luck won't stop!
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Wang Hao slept straight through until three in the afternoon. He was awakened by a sudden, urgent knock on his door.
"Who could it be in broad daylight..." He walked over to open the door and saw four delivery workers standing outside, looking confused: "What's going on?"
No wonder he had such an expression.
At the door, the four delivery workers were carrying a total of six boxes, big and small. As soon as Wang Hao opened the door, they walked straight in, saying, "Is this Mr. Wang? Your friend commissioned us to deliver a computer to you. Where should we place it?"
"A computer?" Wang Hao suddenly realized, "Is it that woman who sent it?"
This was something he couldn't refuse, after all, he had saved her life, right?
So Wang Hao led the four delivery workers to his bedroom. The workers placed the boxes on the ground and started to expertly assemble the computer. As they assembled, they introduced the items to Wang Hao—
"This is our company's latest product, a handcrafted executive office desk."
Wang Hao was even more confused: "Uh… how much is this computer desk?" Executive use, it must be quite expensive, right? Such a desk and chair could easily cost a few thousand bucks?
One of the workers replied, "Sixty-nine thousand yuan."
Wang Hao: "..." Damn, I misjudged by a zero!
After assembling the desk, the delivery workers began bringing in the computer, explaining as they went: "This is currently the best assembled computer on the market, using only the latest and highest-end components. The case uses water cooling, making it the quietest among all computers. The monitor is the latest thirty-six inch curved screen on the market, and the keyboard is the latest ergonomic mechanical keyboard..."
Wang Hao: "..."
This time, he had to save some face; this computer set was clearly expensive, aiming high!
"This whole setup, about twenty thousand?" Wang Hao asked quietly.
Then one of the delivery workers' words left Wang Hao even more dumbfounded: "The water-cooled case alone is twenty thousand. Altogether, it's around eighty thousand."
Wang Hao: "..."
Damn! This was too much, right?! His old computer, including the case, monitor, mouse, and keyboard, only cost three thousand! And now, in a blink of an eye, it was like upgrading from a slingshot to a nuclear missile!
The delivery workers were very quick, completing the setup of the desk, computer, and case in no time. Then they smiled and said: "All done, sir, give it a try."
Wang Hao, still in a daze, pressed the power button.
Approximately five seconds later...
The 365 Security Guard notification said: "Congratulations, your computer has defeated 99.99% of users nationwide, awarding you the title of Seven-Star Super God Machine!"
Wang Hao was ecstatic! Wang Hao was over the moon! Damn, he had never in his life touched such an amazing computer!
Sitting in the handcrafted rosewood computer chair, Wang Hao looked at the massive monitor, feeling no more satisfied.
As a computer enthusiast, what could be more attractive than a super god machine?!
After sending off the four delivery workers, Wang Hao quickly took out his phone to message the woman, but upon opening WeChat, he saw her message first: "Is there more to the novel you wrote?"
She read "Break the Heavens"?
Originally intending to thank her, Wang Hao quickly retracted his hand—currently, there was no more to "Break the Heavens"! Only the first chapter existed!
Forget it, he decided not to reply yet; better check if Golden Sunflower had written more chapters.
Quickly opening QQ and logging in, perhaps today's mishap had used up most of his bad luck. As soon as he logged in, Golden Sunflower's avatar started flashing rapidly!
Golden Sunflower: "Brother Ritian, I was really inspired today! I wrote fifteen thousand words in one go! It flowed so well, Brother Ritian, please take a look and see how it is!"
Wow! Writing fifteen thousand words in a day, couldn't be more satisfying!
Wang Ritian: "Sure, don't worry, let me check first!"
Quickly receiving the file, Wang Hao eagerly opened it to read.
No doubt, Golden Sunflower's writing skills were absolutely unquestionable, in fact, Wang Hao could affirm that it was far superior to many top-tier authors before the luck dice changed the world. But after reading more than ten thousand words, Wang Hao felt something was lacking.
Wang Ritian: "The plot isn't bad, the process is about right, but I feel something is missing, it's not thrilling."
Golden Sunflower: "Huh?! Really? Brother Ritian, what should I do then?"
Wang Ritian: "Don't worry, let me take another look."
Golden Sunflower: "Alright, alright, Brother Ritian, you must point out the problems!"
Wang Hao quickly reread this part from the beginning in detail, and soon found the problem.
Wang Ritian: "The buildup for Nalan Yanran's appearance is insufficient! Where's the resentment?! Without buildup, how can face-slapping later be satisfying? You need to describe the consequences of being dumped!"
Golden Sunflower: "Huh? I did build up here!"
Wang Ritian: "I know you did, but it's not enough! Look, who is the protagonist? Although he was originally a genius, he's now a waste, right? Then is there any problem with a genius coming to break off an engagement with a waste from a rational perspective?"
Golden Sunflower: "There shouldn't be... right..."
Wang Ritian: "What do you mean 'shouldn't be,' there isn't. Think about it, for example, you're a homebody with no outstanding family background, but the girl is from a family with assets worth billions, looks like a star, and comes to break off an engagement with you, is there any problem with that? No, right? So how can we make readers feel that the protagonist is genuinely wronged when the engagement is broken off? That's the key! Only when readers feel the injustice will they enjoy the protagonist's face-slapping later!"
Golden Sunflower: "Kneeling to Brother Ritian! What Brother Ritian says is so reasonable! So how should I write this part?"
Wang Ritian: "You need to write why the engagement is being broken off specifically and the impact it will have on the protagonist and his father. Why is the heroine breaking off the engagement? Because she's now powerful and looks down on the protagonist after being intensely cultivated by the Sect. And that's not enough, look, what is this setting? It's a clan meeting, the Clan Leader's son being dumped in public, how can he still be the Clan Leader? Right? And one more thing, how did Nalan Yanran come this time? Accompanied by a tall, rich, and handsome guy! This is a blatant provocation! It's a comparison with the protagonist! You need to portray this tall, rich, and handsome character! Look at your current version, this tall, rich, and handsome guy lacks any sense of presence! Without a sense of presence, how can he stir up any resentment?!"