okay, I've been thinking of rewriting this because at the beginning I wasn't really taking it seriously but now I'm better at plots and writing in general so if u want a rewrite put it in the comments and I shall or if you want me to continue this one do the same. :)
put 1for rewrite
put 2 for carrying on.
thx to the ones that comment because if u don't ill just drop this because I don't really know what you want and I have another novel I'm writing at the moment. that's 100x better I think no im sure but the rewrite for this one would be way better.
my novels:
the creator of multiverses!
the life of an ordinary guy that cultivate
THE RANDOM POWER SYSTEM.