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"While everyone prepared for the big plan, all Ivy did was sleep. She would be awake for a few minutes and then, the nurse would inject her with a high dosage of painkillers, knocking her out in a few minutes.
Everyone was on high alert. Nobody dared to let their guard down. The situation was critical and even a moment of carelessness would lead to dire straits. They couldn't let that happen.
Jared had to be caught and if they missed this opportunity, they might not get another one.
Sometime in the afternoon the next day, Noah's men surrounded the hospital under Ronnie's orders and their intimidating and sharp presence alarmed the other people. Heads turned and people stopped in their places.
What bugged them out was that these men outnumbered them by a large margin, almost thrice. Though scared, they were curious and they watched the commotion silently.
