[ Chapter 56 ] [ Postpone ]
I want to apologize guys I'm having a hard time to find my pace in writing this chapter and sadly I have to inform you that this chapter has been postpone.
I will have this chapter rewrite with the actual story on it sometimes later and I will let you know once it's done.
This chapter will be the closure for both of them, and the next time Long Jinnian come back to the story is when he meets his fiancee.
As for now I just want to review our male lead so you can have a better view of him from author's viewpoint.
Long Jinnian is casanova by nature, flirty by nature. Appreciating after beauties is his nature.
Sometimes he can't help himself when he was with a beauty. He finds pleasure in having their company when he was not with his love.
However, for complicate reason, as it had been explained in chapter 54, he has a bottom line in which he will never have intercourse with them.
In his self-belief, aside with Feixue, he had never really cheat behind his love as he didn't have intercourse with them.
As the story has mentioned, it's not first time for him in this situation with woman likes Brina. And all of it ended without him having intercourse with them.
So if Brina is able to bed him the story doesn't make any sense at all because its inconsistency.
You can say he is selfish scum and jerk, a man who play with women's heart and bodies. Sadly, that is his flaws. He's not perfect.
A flaws he had to overcome. Please understand his character is as complex as that.
The point is, all of this Brina scene is written in purpose to show you, it's inevitable for a man like him to hurt countless woman's heart in his life. Brina is just one of them.
Qin Feixue will be the only woman who is able to break his so-called devotion. The only woman he cheated with.
Sure in the current storyline he found himself also in love with Feixue. But at one point he will realized it was not a true love as it was the result of his confusion because she is the only woman he sexually intimate with.
The woman he truly in love with is Long Evelyn and Feng Xiulan.
As for his relationship with Evelyn, he is not cheating behind Xiulan on the fact he has a romance with Evelyn. Because Evelyn and Xiulan were aware of each other.
So he is literally cheating with Feixue behind Evelyn and Xiulan.
In this book, the interaction between characters is written based on realistic approach, so you have to read the story also in realistic approach.
Everything has its price, there will always be a consequence for infidelity.
So if Xiulan comes to know his infidelity, he cheated behind her with her very own mother, she will be more than heartbroken.
Both Xiulan and Evelyn are not beta, you know it yourself how possessive Evelyn was with him, Evelyn is absolutely alpha woman who refuse to share her man with another. She will also more than heartbroken if she comes to know his infidelity.
You will see the complicated relationship between them, how male lead is struggling to choose, he will be torn apart between guilt and love.
Not to mention there is also Lin Nan, a woman who have his daughter without him even realize.
You can expect there will be a drama between them.
I'm myself wish for them to have a happy ending, but who knows...
As for Long Cassandra, sorry to inform but I have to say that there won't be any mother-son relationship in this book.
Honestly, I have a plan on writing prologue of this book, the romance between Alexander Long and Cassandra Long. I don't know will I write it on another volume in this book or I simply make another book of it after this book is finished.
Alexander Long is her husband's english name.
As for Cassandra and her husband in this book, I want to portray a blissful and loving relationship between marriage lover on them.
So you can expect there will be fluffy and steamy scene between Cassandra and her husband.
Oh almost forget, I know this book is poorly written as you can find grammatical incorrect all over the place. But I really want this book to get premium. Actually, this book is a contracted book and in the process of becoming premium. And I will get the chapters locked the moment the process is completed, maybe I will locked the chapters from chapter 57.
I would thank you in advance if you still find this book is still worth reading after becoming premium. You know it yourself my update rate at the moment is around... a chapter per week. So... how to say it, you can save one of your fast past to read my weekly update.
Oh again back to my problem with this Brina scene.
Most of you wanting for Jinnian to bed Brina, and trust me I also want him to bed her. But again, plot wise, that won't make any sense.
Sadly, the reason why Brina comes into picture is to be broken and hurt. She represents countless women who were hurt because of him.
Adding her to the romance is out of question.
Here I want to ask you, I'm just asking okay, don't get any hope.
How about he has a one night stand with her? Its consequence is inconsistency and plot hole on the story. You can't blame me and mention about it in the future if I decide to write it.
But I won't write about him bedding other woman again in the future.
I'm just asking, the canon plot is still he pleasure her and himself without having intercourse with her.
Thank you for reading and your supports all this time.