Hello there Ladies and Gentlemen. I realized a few things over the course of the past few weeks concerning this book. There were quite a few things I messed up even in the beginning which caused a lot of problems in the long run. A few problems that appeared were:
- Most importantly a lack of challenge in the later chapters, no threat, tension and action.
- A lack of motivation for the main character to progress
- No clear goal to strive towards
- The world travel in and of itself
Due to these reasons I will try to write a completely different fanfiction with more or less the same update schedule. I teased it before in a few chapters but the new one is named "The Unwilling Sailor".
I will post the first few chapters in a few hours under that name. I thank you for reading so far and your patience. I hope that I learned a lot from this book which will improve the writing quality of the next one. I hope you can forgive me for dropping this and I hope to see you again in my new novel.
I hope you have a wonderful week,
Your Beggar_Genesis