Dear all
I after reading negative comment started working on the second approach and was done with 3 chapters when I read a very negative review regarding my novel. I while writing this novel had always tried to accommodate everyone's needs and has been as connected as I can be but still something like this happened. Thus after reading that the criticism of someone who has never written or published anything of his own has decided to write what I truly intended to write. If someone doesn't like it then I'm sorry every individual has different ideas and approaches regarding the stories mine is unable to satisfy yours thus kindly stop reading the novel.
I'm always interested in listening to criticism and having a healthy conversation with everyone who wants to talk. Sorry to say this but I'm taking the first approach, kindly continue reading. Comment what you feel like, I will respond.