First , no harem. No. Just .... No. I'm trying to make a good story , that is already difficult enough as it is without trying to juggle multiple relationships with conflicting characters.

Secondly, some of the story retcons from canon that don't make sense ( looking at you omniverse ) are changed for the sake of the story , such as Osmosians being actual aliens and Devan being real .

Third , any ACTUAL advice and criticism is welcome.

Please and Thank you.

I own NONE of these Characters FYI .

Belongs to the creators only.

I'm just doing this for fun.

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