hey every one I'm thankful that you've read the my fanfic thus far, here is the basic way actions and words and thoughts are translated or convey thus far.
speaking "hi."
thoughts 'what?'
yelling\shouting "AAAHHH"
exasperations*Sigh* *Tsk*
getting cut off during something or getting hit Hard "Wha-" "Urk-"
onomatopoeia \*BOOM*\ \*CRUNCH*\ \*SNAP*\
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\place or setting\
Anyway that's all for the basic description pls point out any spelling errors and any inconsistency's that may occur and help me improve this fanfic.
Let's get started.
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\oblivion or abyss,edge of the the outer-verse\
it is "here" where one could see all of existence and non-existence here that makes the conceptual idea of infinity and eternity seem inaccurate for how impossibly vast and unchanging this "place" is where one could see(if one could see let alone comprehend this "place") every possible and impossible timeline, dimensions, reality's, and realms all hold about as much power over this "place" as ants on earth have power and effect the entire universe.
yet despite that there two entities that are here one is a being seeming to be made of hundreds of thousands of people or creatures and while it was made of all these beings, you can tell that each being in that collective had at one point lead their own lives with their own convictions each as valid to them as the next convictions some lead good lives,some bad,some completely unremarkable and all those lives are the lives it had influenced in someway and all had two defining feature's that made them important for what they where or did and that was their unbreakable convictions and the fact that almost all of them have gone out of the norm and"broke"the rules of the world whether it's society's rules or rules against the God's that has been its most unique trait combine that with its will and sheer tenacity that lead to this encounter as it's actions have attracted the attention of higher beings.
on the other side was a "thing" that encompasses this entire place and even vaster expansions beyond this place by an unknown number of times possibly even higher than infinity as conceptual ideas such as infinity mean nothing here, yet despite that it maintains a vaguely human out line.
for both beings the idea of identity mean nearly as much as infinity here but for sake of this story we will will refer to them as "Rūrubureiku" and"Michino"
Rūrubureiku looking at the entity in front of it and around in general"so this is oblivion ehhh...im getting a headach just looking around...so i assume you summoned us here cuz i don't have any "life"of ours that could ever reach this place even if we combined all our power and intellects so what do you want me here for i highly doubt with your power you would actually need something of me."
Michino raised a eyebrow(if it had a face)in a amused and slightly impressed manner"ho?....that's quite a rude way to greet someone especially when your a guest."
Rūrubureiku nearly scuffed"well i think most things that carry sentence would be pretty upset when they are taken to an unknown place with unknown intentions."
Michino slightly widens its smile with a bit of amusement and mirth"i suppose that's true but would it make it better if i have a reason."
Rūrubureiku deadpans"well im here now so let's hear it."
Michino keeps his smile but gains a bit of apprehensiveness to it"well....it's cuz im bored out of my mind."
Rūrubureiku becomes stonefaced"well that was so reassuring."
Michino suddenly adorned a serious attitude dropping the cheerful mask"yes yes especially when you've done something only beings of this realm have done,broken the karmic system thereby freeing your self from reincarnation and from fate it's self and attaining True immorality and becoming more of a concept rather than an individual or collective, an idea really so more or less people like me are bound to notice, so I've come to personally greet you as your senior"he finished of at least semi playfully.
both starred each other down neither backing down even a bit one was had a face that was full of annoyance,the other rather playful and mocking both wearing mask they call emotions maybe to mimic something in some form of simple curiosity to maybe longing for one, for the other due to unconsciously doing what he did that at some vague point his many lives until now.
finally Rūrubureiku finally tired of the stair down spoke"Alright I'll take your word for it.....for now"
Michino's smile broadens"Great!! now considering it was i that brought you here it's only fair if I'll entertain you on the house and help you,let's just shake hands, exchange a few idea's and i can help fufill a few wishes here and there, as along as it is acceptable though unless it's some thing boring like oh i don't know, being born again in another life like you've been doing that than your fine and dandy!."
Rūrubureiku go's deep into thought 'Hmmmm...let me sift through the ideas(all his past opinions and thoughts)one of my more recent one's sound kinda appealing,hmmmm...wait I GOT IT!!!! '
Rūrubureiku then looks up"aight i got something but i need your help to make it happen and I'll add up some finishing touches how about it"offering his hand to Michino
Michino looked curiously at the hand and after a moment of interest took it their minds connected and the deal was done.
after which Michino "eyes" widens considerably than his smile widens to the point that you could almost feel it 'hehehee now that is interesting a being that instead of ascending and breaking Karma and fate like themselves the being they are making is merely born without it or better say created like this, as well as very few beings could naturally combine two power source's(ki and cultivation) that could work that well like that tho this will give it a huge advantage as it has the power of both power source's combined increasing the potency immensely along with rapid growth, hyper-prodigy level comprehension abilitys along with infinite potential!!.'(along with the fact that the being having a inborn heavenly god's spiritual veins with a bit more than double than the average or set fifty-four profound entrances therefore, experiencing no bottle necks at along with having a a type of profound veins that act and match the body and match his rapid growth "a monster among all monsters".)(along with fourteen treasures.)
they than got started on their new entertainment.
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\ATG\uninhabited solar system\star-name-TO-TO-3-9\Solar age: 2 billion years\star type: massive-super giant\
in this solar system a major event is about to occur the massive super giant star is about to meet its ultimate fate and go supernova and at this mass will no doubt collapse into a black hole.
that is if the normal process occurred like it should have.
as the star went supernova and exploded destroying numerous planets nearby,then the remaining center began to appear to collapse in on itself like usual but than the scattered debris from both the planets and star dust began to collect at a much more rapid pace condensing into a impossibly small point.
when it seemed to be become black hole it then did something in less then dozens of times faster than a attosecond.
\*BA-BOOM*\
it expanded and took the form of a sphere in then that sphere exploded and from its radius
fifteen objects formed and expelled from it solidifying the creation of thirteen pillers wide enough to cover city's and long enough to touch the moon and back earth(if earth existed here.)all of which where going different directions in the cosmos.
and from the sphere's Center a crystal ball with one thing forming inside a baby boy with with a black spiky hair that reaches the nape. and two bangs down in the middle of his forehead and on his tailbone is a black fur monkey tail, while the other object was a necklace that was silver brooch with a amber gem with a red center that spread out like branches in from center and on the surface of the crystal was a metal tag with a name on it.
the sphere than glowed with slight intelligence and then shot of in the other direction from the pillers at speed's unrivalled heading for one place in mind to fulfill it's purpose.
the planets named Blue Polaris.
\*SWOOOSH*\
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\the Divine realm\top of a cliff\
here can be seen two people one was a young man roughly eighteen to twenty years of age and on his shoulders was a little girl at least three to four years of age and one could easily tell they are related in some way due to both having two very defining features that was their blood red hair and eyes along with there natural high class aura around them that naturally radiated off them both were atop the cliff stargazing.
the little girl eyes were wide in wonder"Wow.... the stars are so pretty big brother."
the young man smile brightens watching his younger sister's reaction"yes it is Ni tian...oh look a shooting star!."
both look at a line shooting across the sky in a brilliant show of gold fire.
what they didn't know was they were watching the birth of a soon to be legend.
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and that's it pls be sure to comment and post your thoughts
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