I know readers are pointing that I have rushed it. I have also got some comments from my friends about it.. I will post at a slower rate while going through the chapters and correcting flaws. There will be character development of the MC with atleast two elders. What I am worried about is the sequencing of my novel where I have give the verdict in the first two chapters of the volume but I go through the journey in the rest of the chapters. As the audience grows hopefully, I will conduct a poll on that. There is no need to panic on the fact that I have not given MC character moments because you will come to realize his convictions in the later chapters I introduce.
Update 16/8/2019- I have changed the synopsis to better suit the novel. Comment on whether it is better than the first one around.
Update 16/8/2019 - Tomorrow the novel will have a small achievement of 10 chapters. I will be following the advice to revisit the background chapters and add more detail given their short nature. Also we will have two more chapters tomorrow, where we find out the fruits of his training. So readers comment and give your advice any advice to make the novel better would be appreciated.
Update 17/8/2019- I have changed the novel background completely. Trying to build up more of the lore I have changed the first chapter.
Update 17/8/2019- So guys I have written and published the 10th official chapter Venturing into the Forest today. Small achievement for me.
Update 18/8/2019 I have kept the promise of character development of our side characters and MC's in this two chapters. We see why the MC will be so adamant on cultivation when he was still so young when he had only heard them being pressured by another sect. The first week ends today with me finishing the six chapters I had promised on Friday on time.
I will appreciate the readers making more comments and joining the discord platform for discussion.
Teaser here- I have written a draft today of our MC's OP powerup today and you will find it out next week
Update 19/09/2019 I have completely rewritten ch-2. The name means land of Paradise. It was an irony intended and the name is a derivative from Sanskrit and Persian Fersi.
Update 20/09/2019
First chapter for the week. This chapter was by far my most controversial one I guess.
Update 21/09/2019 So this is the second chapter for the week. I would want you guys to comment whether the MC will eat the girl or not.
Update 24/09/2019 I have finished the self imposed quota for the week. I am trying to stockpile them up as I head to university week. Hope you guys are enjoying as much as I do. Chapter 17 was my most difficult chapter as of yet not only did I had to include sec scenes which are non consensual, but also try to breed emotions in a brutal way. I did not eat the whole afternoon yesterday when I was writing it to ensure that imagining it could be good. The female readers will feel offended I guess but I knew that I had to introduce my character sooner or later. Thus it is better to include it now. While I know the feminist groups will say that I promised to include character development and prominent roles for our females. I have tried to incorporate character development for the female characters and there will be one touching moment that you guys will see in the next few chapters. So wish me luck