HeartPiercingSpear

Our MC is a common University student, persuing his batchelorate.

One day he installs a new app on his phone.

It's discription read

"Create your own world, create & explore various mistries, all to your heart's content.
Install now"

This app changed his life, and in ways he never believed possible.
He saw as many things you are inclined to believe and just as many things you might have never thought of.

Come and join in his journey.

Oh! And the name of the app you ask?( well look at the at least man) it is the World Creator App. Suprise! Surprise!
*wink**wink*

India

so I like the background of his life hope u descried what he looks like in the next chap (thumbs up)

world creating app, well an interesting tittle i have already gave you my 3 spirit stones just based on the tittle hope story will amuse me even more then its tittle

    "Someone pass me a Element Blaster!"


    "Damn anybody has a type 1F crystal"


    "Shit!! the beast are coming though run!!"


    "Damn these beast! Damn those Politicians!And damn that God too!!"


    while in another space an average looking man with brown eyes and black hair with a hight around 170 cm looked around with a bit of confusion in his gaze.


    "What happened" A lady with blue eyes and black lusturus hair asked the man


    "Nothing it just looked like many people were cursing me again"


    "Oh! Well not surprising, you did make them suffer like this"


    "Sigh how did I end up with you. Still in my defence I did give them plenty of chances to grow and change"


    "Yeah and most of them were all hogged up weren't they"


Hello there if you're reading this I'd just like to ask the you give it the story a try 
its concept is interesting as I'm sure you've read already
And while the grammer and English is rough showing support and helping with corrections is the best way to get the story to be as great as it can be and the author is still learning so definitely cut him some slack because he is willing and continues to improve
Anyway I hope I see you in the comments
Bye for now

Shameless author is here guys, please read this story.
The story is about a man called Ryan who by mistake(now was it a mistake? hmm)  download an app that changed his life.

This is a review of the first two chapters.  The main character, Ryan, accidentally downloads a world building app during his class break. This fundamentally changes his life. The main character is flushed out and the reader gets a sense that he will react to changes emotionally. He also has a reasonable amount of suspension in new environments. He prefers to be inside his comfort zone.  It will be interesting to see what happens to him after his world views are blown apart. 

The story can be improved by fixing spelling and grammar problems. 

Great book! Great concept! I love that he creates a world l! There is only one problem...the update rate is ****ty....I'm an author myself and while I dropped one book I am writing another that's on hiatus because keyboard broke, as such I personally know that there should be a minimum chapters a week or at least every two weeks to keep the readers somewhat interested (I also know this because I read alooot) besides that it's a great story that has potential.

Yet another amazing concept utterly destroyed by a noob and casual writer.

# What's the Plot? :

As the name suggests, it's about a young man getting a cheat mobile app that allows him to create worlds.

# Writing Quality :

It's readable, but that's it. As I mentioned before, the author is a noob, and the story doesn't have a natural flow. It has a lot of unnecessary scenes, and you may find it difficult to read.

# Stability of Updates : 

It's horrible as the author is a casual writer.

# Story Development :

I could not bring myself to read the whole thing, but the story seems to lack creativity. What I don't like is writers using the same old mythology without using their own imagination.

I mean, two thousand years ago the average fantasy was angels- people with wings. But now you are living in an age where you are exposed to multiple cultures. So if you are going to use the same fantasy two thousand years ago, then it feels as if you have reached the limit of your imagination.

I am too tired to type out the rest.

doesn't update that often but the chapters are good so its fine just adding words ok ok oko koko k ok ok ok o k o k o k o. o. ok ko ko. k kk o ko k k ko k k k k ko. ko k o ko kk. k k ko k k k k ok kk. k i i. k m k km mk k km km k km mk m km mk mk m.  km km mk.   mk m.  km.    km

World Creators

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - The Prologue