I have read your comments and suggestions about the way I'm writing this novel. After reading them I have started to try my best to improve the quality of my writing.
Some of you have told me that I am lacking in grammar and English proficiency. Some of you have also told me about the wrong spelling and wrong casing of words.
But I do appreciate the criticism you did, as I see all of that to be something to improve my writing skills. I see them as something that will help me grow as a writer. In my opinion, readers should enjoy the story, so it's their right to criticize the errors of the author.
So I haven't been posting as much as before, as I am trying to improve my writing skills little by little. So I am hoping to hear more of your suggestions, on how to improve my writing.