Hrishikesh_Laskar

Sunita a indian wife falls in love with her brother in law. 
sidhi sadhi bhartiya sanskari patni sunita jo apne devar se pyar kar baithi

ye kahani sunita ki hai. wo ek garib master ki beti hai jo ek chote se gao mai rehti hai. wo jab bari hui to uske mata pita ne uski shadi ek sahar ke larke hariya se kar di jo dusre sahar naukri karta tha. sunita nai b.a tak ki parhai ki hai. ab aage ki kahani sunitake jubani


Good story, but story running very slow. Sfhn.ghjk
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It's the worst plot I've ever read anywhere. Super disgusting. I suggest you to stop writing stories. Even a child can write a better story than yours. 

Story is good, but here is some lack of continuation of word.
Roman is good to write but Devnagiri is better. Sequevence are not good.
Content is good. Idea also good.


khud naya ghar basaya (18+)

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Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1