Hi guys! This is my very first book/story which I am writing.
I hope you guys can help me improve by giving me suggestions.
This story's female lead, is my ideal image of a strong girl/woman. even with ups and downs they keep everything together and don't give up easily. I have read allot of books... and noticed the bad boy/good girl things...
Well I wanted to change something cuz I kinda dont like the fact that a guy can do everything but girl cant or isnt, for example the guy hooks arounds and all, girls is forced in marriage and is treated like shit and all..
So I thought and tried to show that a girl could be both innoscent and bad. Y'know like women empowerment or something. My FL is someone with a painful past, she is smart,beautiful inside out,funny, childlike and playful...
I really hope you all like this, please do consider it my first time writing and I'm just 16
and lastly please tell me if I should be adding some intimate scenes..