Chapter 10 - To any readers

So I've been haveing a little trouble with the next chapter as I feel as I have made the MC to OP and I would like it to be a story of growth and increasing power not a overwhelming powerful Mc all the time, so if anyone was any ideas or feed back I more than welcome it, thank you for giveing my story a read. Also any questions feel free to ask as what I'm writing I'm trying to creat my own semi original lore, I apologies for any grammar issues English is my second language :)