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The Pyschopat Lover

Ashish_Naidu
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Chapter 1 - The pyschopat lover

Opening scene

A 18year young guy playing a see-saw

Seems funny bt when the screen zooms out

You find there is no one playing wid him the other side.

3rd person voice

Kya huha?

Yeh kya ..krra hai is baat se has rahe ho

Lekin aisa yeh q kr rha yeh toh soch lo

Flashback hitting up.....

The first time he approaches a group of kids

Mujhe bhi khilau na tumhare sath plzz

Being kids they all decided to tease him

N they start saying

Nhi khilaiyenge hum jaa

Tu bhohat bura hai

Tere jaison ke sath nhi khelenge

Tu chor dikhta hai

Etc etc

This makes the boy cry

N here a feeling is built in him that the world is cruel.

Present college day

A classroom

Everyone chit chatting ..

Acha lagra hai itne dino baad clg ake ... First year kaise beet gaya samajhi nhi arha... I hope koi diploma wali kadak bandi ajai yaar class mai

Aur yeh kashish ko dekh iss saal bhi akele hi guzarna padega isko..bichara

Whole class filled up expect few last benches n that too is occupied by year drop students

Students saying ye dekh sale y d log itna hoke bhi sudarna nhi wapis wahi harkate shuru

Suddenly dsc girl enters the class in a flimy way n as she sees into the class

All that she sees is jst q place left besides kashish who is jst looking like he has lost in his toughts

She sits der n suddenly students gossiping all around

Arre yeh bandi iske sath bethgaiЁЯдгЁЯдг

Ab is bandi ke toh haal hai

Yr kashish ke toh aaj maze hai

N kashish is jst stunned that someone is sitting besides us

The girl throws her hand towards the guy and says hii its Aditi

The stunned guy stammers his hand he moves his hand to wards her and gets its half way back and runsaway

Aditi is shocked what happened... Her toughts

Kya usko koi kaam yaad aagaya

Haath milake chalejata toh kya huha hotah

Jande ayega agle lecture mai toh puchlenge

Lecture gets over

N nw a guy sitting beside bench approches her and says hi this shubham

She responds to him n they get to know eachother n still seeing that kashish hasnt yet returned she narrates the incident to shubham n says i dnt know y he reacted so?

Shubham laughs loudly and says

Tu kashish ke baremai sochri hai ЁЯдгЁЯдгJab dikhra hai ki log aha akele bhetne tayar hai bt uske sath nhi tujhe samajna chahiye na kitna pagal hoga woh

Woh logon mai rehta hi nhi n rahe toh bhi logonko uska bartav sehen hotah nhi

woh bhohat irritating hai yaar n bhohat introvot hai ...haam sab dur hi rehte hai usse ..tu bhi doori rakh uss idiot se psycho saala

Hearing this her inner voice strikes

She remembers herself being ignored by evryone as she was a bit fat in the childhood ...as the knew the pain of ignorance she got a soft corner for the guy in her heart

Tring tring tring

Jst as she hears the sound of the recess bell

She rushes out of the class in search of the guy

Library? No he wasnt there

Boys common room ? No he wasnt there too

In the canteen .....noo

The parking lot ...no

with a lot of confusion she was returning to the canteen to have her lunch

Bt fortunately she found him altough in a typical way

He was sitting on the stairs sticked to the wall

And each one passing over there was hitting him on his head ( tapli) .

Seeing this she became more eager about him

As she knew going to him n talking to him.here wont work , she jst holds his hand n says "chal" n jst pulls him towards the canteen.

Canteen scene

On a table sitting opposite to eachother

Aditi pushes her tiffin towards him

Chal kha

N again he stammers Aah ahh like hmm

N aditi sees his shivering hand and she gently moves her hand on to his n holds it..

Itna kyu tension lehra yaar tu

haa mujhe bhook toh lagi hai

Lekin isliye thodina tujhe khajaungiЁЯШВЁЯШВ

And for the very first time kashish utters few words

Sorry bt mujhe adat nhiye

N aditi responds very quick

Toh adat laga lena ЁЯШЕЁЯШЕ

Filal mera yaha koi nhi hai acha frnd tere alawa

Opps Mr.Sincere sorry

Maine toh apse permission li hi nhi

Friends ??

She moves her hand towards him

Bt kashish was alot more than introvert

he remained still

Bt aditi lifts his hands n puts its into her hand

N says

Ooy ab zyada footage maat kha ha

Friends?? again she asks

N den may me a normal one would say ha friends

Bt kashish ask ... Forever wala ya temporary wala?

This made aditi guess about the bad things happened in his lifE

Aditi :Abe kashish tere jaise antic piece ko forevrr hi sambhalke rakhungi na..

Kashish:(Aksar log yeh kehkr life mai aajate hai ki mai forever rahunga...aur mai maan bhi jata hu .haar baar..iss baat se waqif honeke bavajud bhi , ki har kisi ko kbhi na kbhi jana toh hoga hi)

I believe in science ...N thereby i believe no thing is ideal.

Aditi: Are mene toh yuhi Mr.sincere kehdiya ..Tune toh baat dil pe lehli So science student hone ke nate tujhe yeh bhi pata hona chahiye that each case has an exception. Kya pata Shayad Mai tere life ka woh exception hu?

May be it was smile on his face after a long span..

Kashish:Mera naam toh jaan gai tu... Tera naam kon bataiga?

Aditi:sunn ab itna bhaav khaya tu terko yeh punishment hai ki

Mai tujhe nahi apna naam bataungi nahi kuch

Lekin, lekin harami teri agar mujhe aaj raat tak friend request nhi ayi insta pe toh tu gaya!!

So huge trouble u c ... kashish doesnt even interact with any of the classmates ? Nw how will he do it ...

Kbhi sunna hai log pyaar ke chakkar mai najane kya kya krjate hai

Apna hero chor bangaya tha..

Usne chupkese aditi ka phn liya khudko miss call diya

N uske insta se khuko req bheji aur khudki accept bhi krli..

After being home

Kashish researches evrything stalks her insta feed .. sees her tagged photos finally understand where does she recides

(The 8pm suprise)

He calls her ..tring tring

Aditi picks up the phone

n kashish mimics his voice N says

Hello mam... This is Zakir shaik from flipkart

I have some type of gift parcel which belongs to you.

Aditi suprised i havent ordered anything ...

She asks whats the amount to be paid

He said mam its gifted parcel ... The payment is already done.

So can u jst come downstairs . I m waiting for u at the gate of the soceity . She hurries up with eagerness

At the gate

She sees a guy with a mask

With a bag

she asks him

Flipkart? In a doubtful manner

He nods his head n opens his bag n all he picks out frm his bag is a pastery box wid a pastery in it n he gives it to her n a sticker on it says HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY

What... First of all where is the parcel ...flipkart delivers a pastery?.. Is he frm flipkart oh fuck is it even a friendship day today....

N suddenly the delievery boy puts his mask down

N says HI ADITIЁЯШЗ

woahh... Checkmate

Aditi screams Kashishhhhhh

N kahishh says before tu kuch puche bole

Meri baate sunnle

Pehli baat sorry ki maine tera phn churaya

Khudko follow kiya ЁЯдг khudko miss call dediya

Dusri baat Tere photos ke tag se pata chala tu rehti kaha hai

Thisri baat pata hai aaj friendship day nhi hai bt pehli baar kisine mujhe khud hokar dost samja hai ... So mereliye toh yahi frndship day hai..

So happy frndship day buddy

Aur koi shak janab?

N aditi is like jst waiting for him to complete

N as he completes she jst hugs him n says abe harami thnks alot for the suprise . itna khartarnak wala suprise kbhi nhi mila yaarЁЯШЕ

Bdw mujhe toh laga tha tu introvert type banda hai...

Kashish:Tha shayad

Tujhse milne se pehle ....

N they have a casual chat n he leaves.

The nxt day nightmare..

Kashish was again left all alone

Guess what

Diploma students where asked to make a seprate Div

So aditi had to leave .

Seeing kashishs shocked face

Aditi says while leaving : Chill maar recess toh apna hi hai ..sath mai khayenge aur apna insta toh hai hi ...agle saal ajaungi wapis issi class mai dnt worry

Day 1 : Canteen gone right

Den further insta chatting starts ..

Hi ..hi ...kya chalra

She says yaar ek banda hai yaar bhohat sahi flirt krra mujhse maja araha hai usse baat krne..

A huge amount of insecurity n frustation rushes into him n he says usmai kya mai bhi toh krlu

N she texts

ЁЯШВЁЯШВЁЯШВ

Kashish :

Kya has kyu rhi hai tu harami

Aditi:

Bache tujhse na ho payega.

Kashish:

Oh madam bacha kisko bola .... Issi bachese aap apna dil laga bethi ho

Aditi:

Oho kashish nt bad ha...

Kashish :

Tu sikhade pro banjaunga

Aditi : Acha ok , so lets begin the session of how to flirt

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Lots of chatting in the session of how to flirt

Where aditi was jst teaching him n kashish was feeling it

Day2: Canteen gone right

Day3:She wid her male friend , canteen gone right but kashish jst remained as n audience to their talks

Day4: she called kashish , n said will nt be able to make it up , my friend has met wid an accident so need to c him at d hospital

Kashish imagining .... himself cutting off the brake line of aditi's friends bike that day early mrng ...so that he is nt able to reach the clg n aditi all alone comes to the canteen. N thats the reason y he met wid an accident

His this wrong move eventually turned the situation more worse ... This accident made the bond of aditi n her frnd's bond more strong. Her priorites changed .

Futher few days: Aditi was real busy with taking care of her frnd ... Canteen time was the time when she had to take him to regular checkups

The habit of canteen no more remained a habit nw.

Kashish got more depressed which trigged his violent face.

He started txting her continously calling her continously ...

The bond was no more due to affection bt only by force

Kashish had to wait a long for her replies

He started txting her on whatsapp

and her last seen where ruining their story

message from Kashish

Busy hai shayad 11.32pm

aditi active now

Kashish waited alot n slept

Mrng

When kashish sees the last seen

2am.

But no reply

The fear of losing her increased

He started putting more efforts

For kashish it was Aditi aditi aditi 24x7

Bt it was like iritating irritating irritating 24x7 for aditi

Aditi started refusing him ... He started calling from different number... BT eventually the result ended up the same.

So this time he straight away went to her home.

This time it wasnt a suprise ...it was a shock of fear for aditi ... Hug turned into jaldi hath yahase

The way he begged her for her attention

Made her realize day 1 of clg words of shubham

Maat padh uske chakkar mai physo hai sala

Literally his actions where alot like a pyscho

N she decided to give it a flight.

Aditi said ... Please get out of my life . U r making it hell

Hearing this kashish lifts the knife besides the fruits n puts on to his neck ... And says plz aisa maat bol literally crying ..warna mai marjaunga ....

This jst made aditi blank... All she wanted to get him rid off for nw .. She jst holds his shoulder acha baba thik nhi jaungi tu dhang se reh toh sahi plzz ... Pehle jaise normal ... N while leaving he says tu bhi toh normal rehna ..

She says mai bhi hu wid a fake smile...

He says : Toh woh last time to alvida kehte wakt hug diya tha...

Den she gives him a good bye hug

This time the hug was jst for the sake of kashish bt the feeling of heart where missing.

Aditi tries to behave as good as she is able to

Bt kashish questions..tu pehle jaise nhi hai

Tu time nhi deri

Mai impo hu ki nhi

Makes her block him in evryways.

That day night

He posts pics cutting his veins...

u nver understood me

U will nver know what u meant to me

Such sort of story on his ig account

This screenshot however lands to aditi.

This makes her cry the whole night .

Th next day..

Kashish sees whether he cn get a talk wid aditi in the recess bt he finds her no where.

As she woke late she directly comes for the after recess lectures..

After clg gets over ..evryone leaves ...

N in the fear of kashish aditi jst sets her self wid real quick walk towards the bus stop.

Bt kashish on the way to home finds aditi n screams aditi ruk ...aditiiii

N seeing him coming near him

She hurries up n ends up wid an huge accident

A vry first time aditi suprised kashish but wid a shock

He runs towards her ... Holds her on his laps.

N says aditi kuch nhi hoyega ...hospital chalte hai .... Rickshaw rickshaw he screams...

Puts her into the rickshaw

Aditi:Yeh ek baar mujhe bolne dega

Tune na yaar yeh sabit krdiya

Ki iss zamane mai insaniyat dikhana bhi galat hai

Nahi tujhpe uss din daya ati ...nahi aaj yeh huha hota

Sab ek taraf bt

Ab dukh bas iss baat ka hai ki insaniyat dikhane ki galti maine ki hai ...lekin usski kimat mere maa baap ko bharni padegi mujhe khokar...

Kashish says nhi yaar galti meri hai

Aditi says haa tu toh jhad hai iss galti ki lekin tera kya jara hai ... Tu sambhalega kya mere maa baap ko ab.... This all happens in rickshaw n it reaches the hospital .

N while pulling her into the i c u using the roller table he says tujhe kuch nhi hoga tu hi sambhalegi tere maa baap ko woh bhi ache tarekse.

climax 1: aditi dies ...n this makes kashish to feel he is nthng wid out her ...n he is about to commit sucide by hanging himself ..

He closes his eyes n says sorry mummy pappa n suddenly aditis lines hits up ...teri galti hai lekin bhutenge mere maa baap...tu sambhalega kya mere maa baap ko

This makes him realize his responsiblities

He drops the plan ..studies hard eventually keeps visiting aditis parents taking care of their needs...

N it ends Like...

Aditis dad says... Aditi agar yaha hoti toh usse bhohat acha lagta tujhe aur tu jis tareqse hamari aditi ki kami mita raha hai yeh dekhar...

He sees besides him n smiles seeing the imaginary aditi n says

Uncle woh abhi yahi hai... Aur ha sahi kehrhe ho aap iss baar woh dil se has rhi hai.

chalta hu uncle...

while going downstairs ... He sits on the stairs for knoting his shoes n gets lost in his toughts n suddenly aditi comes from bck gives him a tapli

N says ohh pyscho chalo issbar tumhe kichke lejane koi nhi ayega ..

Kashish:Ab samji aditi ... Teri uss galti ki kimat tere gharwalo ko nhi mujhe chukani padi ...mene apna sab kuch kho diya joh ki tum thi... Aur tumhne toh asani se kehdi ki tera thodi kuch ja rha haiЁЯШФ

Chod chal see-saw khelegi..

N they play see-saw ...

Screen zoom out ..kids laughing seeing him

Woh bhaiya itne bade hai lekin akele hi see saw khel rhe haiЁЯдгЁЯдг

Ends with the laughing sounds of the kids

----------------------------ASHISH.NAIDU---------------------------