I first did this on Wattpad, but the target demographic didn't match my story at all.

I'm going to edit it chapter by chapter before I resubmit it. This means this will be slightly behind. If you want to know what happens further ahead you can check out my Wattpad profile (which has the exact same story but split up more).

This is my first time actually trying to write to an audience, so all feedback is appreciated!