I originally had a simple and original idea. Dara gains magical ability. This ability gives him opportunities:
- to anticipate events (the author also succeeds in this, sometimes, you think, here is this man coming, you look out the window, he really goes)
- to understand a foreign language (this idea arose, after reading the reviews, when English-speakers from Europe, USA, Britain, Canada, Australia, New Zealand were not satisfied with the level of English grammar, those who have English, the second or even the third language. And so , we turn on the magical ability to say for a week and you write and speak correctly)
- be able to bargain and covertly control the consciousness of the audience by achieving the goal set by the main character ...
These were the main features. BUT ... after reading the historical materials about the "tags" that were issued in the TAN empire for their vassal territories ... these abilities have increased ... which somewhat puzzles me.
In general, the idea to write a short story appeared that I wanted to share extensive material on the history of the Silk Road. new directions in farming, the ecological direction of farming development, healthy cooking, for which you need to use pure products without preservatives, a combination of Chinese cuisine with the concept of hot, cold and neutral products and Persian healing cooking, where each product has its own healing properties, and in combination with others it strengthens or weakens them.
I repeat a lot of material, it is at least 450 books of 18-19 and mid-20th century. Sometimes there are too many ideas, you start writing one, you don't finish it, and you start writing another.
Excessive detailing ... but on the other hand, as without details, in them the very meaning is ????!
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The author wanted to write an original novel, without reymeks and strong borrowings on similar topics - agriculture, farming, magic, cooking, systems ... and do without cultivation ...
As soon as the "cultivation" comes across in a good novelty, then write, it's gone. A funny comedy that turns into humor turns into a dull story with a description of these techniques, which is not particularly pulling to read the rest of the story.
Let there be an omnipotent system! But she will not dictate her requirements - to those who use this system.
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As is usual in Asia, and in particular in the East ... the families are large, if not a clan, then a large community. At least 30 close relatives. And so if you raise all relatives close and not very, then you can get from 400 to a couple of thousand people. And it can be scattered not only in the prefectures of one country, but also in the countries themselves. Such as the USA, Germany, Australia, New Zealand, Sweden, Canada, Russia, Finland, Saudi Arabia, Jordan, the United Arab Emirates, Iran, Britain ... About and perhaps Saint Denis ...
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And large families are not clans. In the clans there is terror, tyranny, factional struggle, conspiracies, intrigues, betrayals, deception, merging information to a competitor, and sometimes the use of "active measures". Therefore, the author, has focused on a large and friendly family. Although because of this, many minor heroes appeared, they would not be confused now !!!!
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Arches:
Trade
Agriculture
New technologies
Magical make up
Online Farm Shop
Communicating Magical Entities
The story of microbes in the planet
The story of the order of wandering monks and the related fall of meteorites 500 years ago
Buying Dry Fruits
Making new and remembering old recipes for making eastern sweets
Sale for export ...
New magical features ...
Finally, the start of the farm operation ...
Here I would like to introduce romance, liveliness, move away from details ... well, I hope the author will manage to do this ...
If there are any suggestions from readers write.
Respectfully,
P.S. Today, probably it will not be possible to write a new chapter. But tomorrow I will try to write two chapters of 500 or maybe 1000 words each.