I apologize for this but I'm going to take a while to think what I want to happen next in the story. Seeing as it's the beginning I understand that this isn't all that good seeing as I'm a new author. I have school and I'm working on another story as well. I haven't written in this story in half a year so I have to get a feel of what I want agin. But if you want to check out a story of mine that's close to this check out "criminal yesterday, FBI agent today" agin I'm sorry for the unprofessionalism. I will work it out and continue as soon as possible.
(I've never shown my writing to anyone so I'm trying to make this as best as possible.)