EternalBliss4U

With great power comes great responsibility but Peter had never imagined getting in contact such power. Disclaimer: I do not own anything

This a story about Peter getting the spider powers and chakra from Naruto. In this story Naruto gives him advice and changes his direction to avoid tragedies.

Peter is stronger and has more choices now.

He will get involved in many events and change their outcomes.

He will build his own team and handle hero business effectively instead of letting it destroy his life.

He will deal with villains differently and break them when necessary.

There will be challenges and he won't be one shotting anything except normal thugs or weak villains.

It is a harem but just as usual it will be slow and all characters will be built upon.

There will be drama but no cheating.

I won't be adding any of that shit in my stories.

Harem girls:
Gwen (Spidergirl)
x-23 
Jessica Jones
Black Widow
Black Cat
Silver Sable


the story had started well, but it started to get worse and in chapter 18, 19 and 20 for me they were the last straw
I started reading this story due to the author's promise in the reviews that he contradicted in the most perfect way possible
"It is a harem but just as usual it will be slow and all characters will be built upon."

in some stories female characters appear so captivating that even if the MC has a love interest you can't help but hope that they are with the MC, ironically this happens mainly in stories that don't have a harem, so sometimes I look for stories with harens and slow romance to hopefully see it happen. "The novel extra" is a good example that great female characters that make readers divide into factions to cheer for each of the girls, although the ending left something to be desired romantically speaking because it was so vague that it even seemed like the MC was alone .

That said, this story gave me the opposite of my expectations as the author contradicted his own words, the story got worse starting with Gwen approaching the MC, it was interesting, but the MC just stayed with her and Jessica (who doesn't know ) countless times without explanation (without s.e.x), knowing Peter's moral compass he should be in conflict about it, but it is a fanfic and as it is harem it is understandable that he was more open to it. even though he was in a way cheating on Jessica.

the big problem was in chapter 18 where Gwen and Cindy (the MC didn’t know her) are bitten by the radioactive spider and are attracted to Peter, no problem, that is, until they are teleported by Naruto’s spider and have a treesome of suddenly because everyone lost control, yes you didn't get it wrong, the MC just fu.c.k.ed 2 girls of which one had feelings for him and the other he didn't know after promising Jessica that they would take their time to develop the relationship. just for Jessica (his first girlfriend he didn't even have s.e.x with) to arrive sometime later to see the three of them naked and want to spank them (chapter 19), in the same chapter she controls her fury, drags Peter aside and has s.e.x with him like her don't want to be left behind in chapter 20

if this is a slow harem then i am afraid of what is a fast harem.

this is not the only problem point in this fanfic, being honest the author is, without offense, a super fanboy of Naruto, can be observed through all his other 19 fanfics in which a few are linked with the end of one of them and others two also appear to have been completed, leaving about 7 incomplete and 8 that have been updated recently. The point here is that they are all fanfics / crossover with Naruto.
Honestly I don't care if someone is a super fan of something or not, the problem here is that Naruto looks like the MC's stalker who is always watching him and what he does, giving advice and in his first real fight against a super villain Naruto literally possesed Peter's body, do you understand how disturbing it is to have someone watching over you who can possess you?
I thought he would just train the MC and get out of the MC's life, maybe returning in the final battle or something
the author also used Naruto from one of his completed stories in which Naruto became super op almost at the same level as the one above all.

as i already talked about the negative points let me talk about the positive points that made me give a few stars to this fanfic

the writing quality is excellent, there are no strange phrases in which the actions of the MC are expressed with the use of an asterisk or other characters as in some other fanfics, like "* sigh * I understand" or "[smile] everything is fine ".

the backstory already exists but has been slightly modified to change the future, an example is Peter wanting to open a company and taking a more business-focused view

the secondary characters have not been forgotten, Peter always has in mind the welfare of his Uncle Ben and Aunt May, this makes the story more realistic unlike so many bloodthirsty and emotionless genocidal xianxia MCs who don't care about anyone, even the flash ( the athlete who bullys peter) has his past explained and becomes a better person, becoming friends with peter in his own provocative way(he stoped the bully), this is an impressive difference from other fanfics that simply beat him, traumatize him or take revenge in some way, so I really liked it.

In conclusion, this story has potential, but the harem and the romance that was the reason I came here were simply destroyed in these three chapters that forced and pushed the situation in a crazy way and I can't find any more willpower to continue reading, but for those who don’t care about it, and are also warned about what to expect in these three chapters, I believe it can be a good read that could possibly improve in the future if the author accepts criticism

I am really enjoying reading this even though it still has just a few chapters. The author should put the review that he wrote on the summary because it made me interested in reading this fanfic. The summary that is up now is to vague.
The writing is really good.👌
The beginning is a little strange to say the least, getting your spiderman power from naruto haha, but interesting mixing chakra with spiderman power.
I hope the relationships are well developed since it is going to be a harem. I really like the relationship with jessica jones so far although she forgave him to quickly in chapter 20. But what can i say spiderman luck hehe. Nice lime also.😏

The premise at first seemed too good, I was too excited to read an epic story about a shinobi-like Spider-Man adventure... With Naruto somehow involved, but nonetheless it's bound to be fun, right... 
Yet 70% of this fic is frustratingly just a massive info dumb, about characters and stuff we already have overall knowledge of... Come on, man, seriously, Marvel Comics have been around for SO long already, we know about Kingpin's and Osborn's shit already, this approach of deep looks into character backgrounds would undoubtedly work on original fiction(Unknown new characters, settings, etc), but not in this case, no, we just need a paragraph or two of superficial stuff about these two decades old characters to know what's going on.

This is surprisingly good, especially considering we're on webnovel, but it could hold it's own on more serious sites as well.

My one and only gripe so far is the Xianxia or I guess they might be Chinese wording sometimes. Grammar and sentence structure are actually pretty good but the occasional Chinese wording really detracts from the story. A good example would be Jess saying something like "Don't you want to enjoy greater things?" when referring to ***. I'm guessing it's more or less a 1 to 1 translation and it really doesn't flow well. This also makes the conversations the characters have to feel very stilted or just plain weird and out of place whenever it comes up.

Honestly, my one suggestion to the author would be to read more English literature or even fanfics from other sites, not webnovel, so he can get the hang of English idioms and a better way to word things rather than the current 1 to 1 translation. 

Maybe try posting your fics on QQ and FFnet or if you never plan to add actual *** scenes then SV and SB. People will likely help you more with this issue there.

Let's start with the world, its Marvel so its bound to be interesting with the large amount of characters and possible story arcs in the comics. In terms of character, the MC is pretty much Peter with a grandpa system AKA Naruto, which I find is pretty good as the author made Naruto wiser and more powerful(I believe he ranks among the low/mid-level of top tier Marvel characters). As for the side characters, the author might want to expand more of their stories instead of info-dumping though. In terms of the plot, its slowly building up from what I've read so far but we'll see as more chps are released. The writing quality is good and no major mistake so far. 

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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

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I really loved this story to the very end.!

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most fanfic authors on this app are usually inconsistent but I can't say that about this author his stories flow well characters are well developed and everything novel I have read by him had been good this author is a diamond in a quarry of coal

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MC comes off as a sode character to naruto and if you are hoping for a different peter then this isnt for you... yeha he might kill in the future but he is still a pansy idk couldve been good if naruto wasnt introduced as a character like at all

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as usual all your books are awesome but I can not give you a five star since you update a bit slow and I understand that you have several books you write at the same time

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The fact that this is a harem deserves the lowest of ratings

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Chakra Spider (Naruto X Marvel)