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Chapter 25 - Daoist Master of Qing Xuan

Website : qidian china

Views : 1.98 million

Rating : 9.3(258)

Chapters : 1057

Status : completed

Word count : 2.20million

Author : Zhong Yuan Wu Bai

author level : lv5

No of works : 2

Disscussion : 1232

Year started : 2016

Translated works :

Genres : Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Martial Arts, Mystery, Xianxia

Tags : Male Protagonist, Transmigration, Underestimated Protagonist, Weak to Strong

Popularity : not popular in china

Last edited : 28/dec/2018

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Website : qidian international

Views : 1million

Rating : 4.2(51)

Chapters : 164

Rank : 185

Status : ongoing

Schedule : 16ch/week

Translator :

Editor :

Premium : No

Popularity : Not popular here

Last edited : 28/dec/2018

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Synopsis :

What is a Daoist Master? One that is imageless in ten directions and vanishes in the six paths; unrestrained by the three realms and the five elements.

After a day at the clinic, Dr. Li Feng met with an accident on his way home. When he regained consciousness, Li Feng found himself in the body of a weak teenage boy who was born out of wedlock, Shen Lian. Who was the father? The mother would not tell. A scripture he found among his mother's remnants was the only thing he knew about his father.

The mother came from a wealthy and well known family. When Shen Lian was recalled back to the Shen family, he was entitled for part of the grandfather's inheritance and businesses. Despite the grand value, Shen Lian did not take a cent with him when he decided to leave the family. Why would he leave this comfortable life behind?

His journey with this new identity brought him into this new world as he travelled between realms in search of knowledge to improve his Daoist skills. As he conquered trial after trial, would he become the chosen one? Will he succeed in becoming the Daoist Master? Only time will tell.

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POSITIVE REVIEW :

Like it, love it, and you guys should definitely read it. This novel is a novel where you have a mc that goes beyond the common senses of muscled headed mcs of wuxia and xianxia novels. He's level headed and not brash, dude is like Batman with a little sage and zen quality in him. Just because he's not brash doesn't mean he's a pushover. I just love the novel, can't wait for more translations.

-proudEnvy (Webnovel)

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CRITICAL REVIEW :

Terrible story right from the start. You have a middle aged man climbing the mountain and knocking on the gate to a temple. A young boy with yellow and pale features opening the door. The author then jumped to talk about how a doctor transmigrated from our world to this world. But you didn't have a clue whether he's talking about the middle aged man or the young boy.

No in depth details regard about cultivation. This is a doctor a normal person who believes in science who got supernaturally transported to another world. It's a contradiction to one's belief as a doctor. Yet he's happy and went along with everything and yeah a busy doctor still have time to read wuxia, xianxia novels and have an encyclopaedic knowledge relating to the Daoist teachings in the former world.

Our main character Shen Lian seem to suddenly have the ability to throw missile projectiles without practicing. Random weapon called fly cutter to defend himself.

Martial Arts technique names are thrown around and sometimes provide no details to explain what the move looks like. At other times the author spent long sentences describing and explaining the fight. But at the same time squeezing large volume of senseless information when the audience should be focused on the fight itself without being distracted by the author's desire to explain things.

It is all over the place. Gets worst when his soul leaves his body and he decides to save his female cousin by cutting ethereal green lines that were attached to her spirit/soul.

The author explain things that don't need explaining and don't explain things that need explaining. The pacing and logic is just ridiculous.

He doesn't know how to write a story.

-GingerMessiah(NU)

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In my library : No

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A/N : I'm sorry guys I didn't update since about three weeks. Past few weeks had been very hectic due to some personal reasons.

From tomorrow onwards I'll try to update at least 3 chapters a days. I know it's low but my college started and making every chapter is actually taking more time than I imagined.

Also thank you so much for the people who voted even though it wasn't being updated, especially Jadyp who surpassed even me by a large margin lol and also EdwinTr and Jeklors who are not much far from me. Although you didn't have to vote when I didn't update.