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I hope he is going to have more psycho thoughts
Or hearing voices ;)

So far I seem to be liking the book, sure it lacks a bit in some places and the characters still need to develop some background to them but overall its super great! Can't wait for more chapters.

It is improving from the first character and so forth, still need more than just that though but I'm sure it will truly become something phenomenal in the future.

This is the best **** I've ever read, to bad it's still ****............................................. that's all I wanted to say let me leave now................

Yoooo This seriously could make it into an anime if you try hard enough it fits so well, the dark atmosphere it tends to bring with the plot sure is very good, Hope the chapters come along faster though

It's soooooooo good yet somewhat bad at the same time but truly interesting. Improve in your writing even if by a little so you can truly bring out emotions! Then it would be really cool to read this amazing book.

Somewhat decent, I wonder what will happen to Hibiki as he goes along with Akemi, seems pretty cool. Though you should start adding more development for their background!

Interesting but could do better. Still good though, I will continue to read and see where this takes me. I hope it gives satisfaction as I keep on reading If not it will become a waste of potential and time.

For 'Chapter 2: Encounter' Once Akemi Ueni announces that she is a murduer please play 'Straight Bet from Myth and Roid/Re:Zero to get the dramatic effect while having the music playing in the background.

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This is actually really bad, like I could not read it at all. It seems like the author is kinda a weeaboo and tried to make a novel look Japanese and such but since he himself isn’t the character fall short of culture and tradition which is quite odd to witness. It needs improvement in every sector.

It was a story about a man who had struggled a lot through out his life. He got only one friend that he can trust. One day he was kicked out of his job place. He was so dishearted. He came to know that his home has also been taken. He decided to go to his friend's place but he got annoyed because of two men and killed them. Here the story starts when a good person became a bad person. He met his friend but she refuses to help so killed her too. Later on he met a girl who was a killer too. He met her friend who train them for a mission of killing the corrupted people. But more thrills are waiting for them. A very good and thrilling story it is. 

Not best story I've read, but it's most definitely not the worst. As long as the author continues to write , I can see this in the top 100+, with a few edits ofcourse.  (Edits needed here too)

Failed.

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Volume 1

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