Ay bois, Its me your friendly neighborhood Author-san. This is an auxiliary chapter where I'll be posting what I fix to the novel during the editing period (*gasp). Anyways, this is bound to fill up quick (hopefully), so lets go~
P.S. If I miss anything, this would be the best place to comment what I've missed, since I probably won't be looking for new comments to the complete story very often~
Chapter 1
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore
-Got rid of the Speed Stat as it becomes worthless later on as you know…
-Also got rid of the in-chapter updates to skills, so no more (1/100) outside of Status updates!
-Energy → Chakra (Stat)
-Word count increased from 1,397 to 1,462
Chapter 2
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore
- Why Chojusen is able to walk at 2 months old without getting odd looks
-Word count increased from 1,864 to 1,984
Chapter 3
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore
- Chojusen has a more "natural" response to Obito...
-Word count increased from 1,706 to 1,801
Chapter 4
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore
- Chojusen has a more "natural" response to the situation in general
-Word count increased from 1,562 to 1,608
Chapter 5
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore
- Chojusen has a more "natural" response to the situation in general
-Word count increased from 1,644 to 1,665
-These are getting harder to fix...
Chapter 6
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added the missing Space Locking Skill (Which was added into Chapter 7 at the time)
-Word count increased from 1,737 to 1,793
Chapter 7
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore
- Space Locking Skill that should've been in the earlier chapter has been removed
-Word count decreased from 1,612 to 1,580 :(
-These are getting harder to fix...
Chapter 8
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore
-Word count increased from 1,987 to 1,994
Chapter 9
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Word count increased from 1,607 to 1,613
Chapter 10
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Word count decreased from 1,657 to 1,656 :(
Chapter 11
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added several sentences to fix plot/lore
-There is now a reason for why Karin's mom was able to force Chojusen to bite her finger.
-Some of the phrasing has changed to be more "descriptive."
-Word count increased from 1,656 to 1,853
Chapter 12
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added several sentences to fix plot/lore
-Void Cloak's never before seen defect gets mentioned (Its nothing too crazy...)~
-Some of the phrasing has changed to be more "descriptive."
-Word count increased from 1,681 to 1,837
Chapter 13
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added several sentences to fix plot/lore
-First Passive Skill being Staff Mastery was fixed~
-Some of the phrasing has changed to be more "descriptive."
-Word count increased from 1,680 to 1,787
Chapter 14
-Fixed typos across the board~
-Added several sentences to fix plot/lore
-Some of the phrasing has changed to be more "descriptive."
-Word count increased from 1,600 to 1,626