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Chapter 7 - *PLEASE READ AND COMMENT*

Alright so I'll get to the point. I've been re reading my story so far and I've realized that the pacing seems really fast and somewhat strange. What I mean by this is that the story goes like this: this happened, then this happened, then that. Note that everything happened within a day. That's why I want to revise the chapters and in a way change the story slightly as I have a more concrete idea on where I want to go. So right now I have two options and I'll leave it up to you guys/girls to decide.

1. Continue the story even with its current flaws. Try to at least finish the first story arc and see where it goes.

2. Revise the story and replace old chapters with new (deleting them and reuploading new version)

If you guys/girls want option two, it will around a week to revise everything. First chapter will be around 2000 words and the rest around 500 to 1000. Once I'm done revising I can upload all chapters within one chapter. Only problem with this is most readers won't read of it as it become a huge wall of text. So my other option is to upload revised chapters from 1 to 6 over a period of time( let's say everyday or so for a week)

Well that's what I wanted to say. Please comment opinions. I know many don't comment or even have accounts but I really need other opinions right now. Thank you for reading

-Author chan