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This chapter is summarized version of Hunter Exam and the last fights. Only with some differences. I wanted to skip it, but it is important. Have fun.
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As I was walking toward to the Ship, I startled with sudden warning flash from my Observation Haki. I moved my head to a little bit to the left, and three deck cards flew where my head just was. They stick deep into the tree at the front of me. I knew who arrived, but I couldn't feel her until she attacked. She must sneak on me with Zetsu.
"Mmmn, I knew you were strong." she licked her lips seductively and looked at me smiling. She was holding her hip with the left hand, and her right-hand finger was on her lips. She was looking alluring with the bare stomach, but I knew how dangerous she was, so I waited.
"I want to fight with you! I want to kill you." She said, moving her hips forward, in a weird, self-satisfied face.
'Did she just have an orgasm?' I couldn't help but ask Crow. Is she crazy?
"In original series, Hisoka would turn on by fighting. Against the strong, he would grow excited to meet any new people he deems worthy of fighting or anyone with the potential to be a good fighter and entertain him in the future. The thrill of fighting strong Nen users in tactical battles and near death experiences is an orgasmic experience for her. It seems like female Hisoka is not that different either." Crow explained to me.
'So that is how it is.'
"I don't want to fight with you," I said and started to walk to the ship. I honestly didn't want to fight with this crazy woman. Firstly she was strong, even if I could walk away without getting hurt, I wasn't sure I could take her down easily. Secondly, I got attracted to her. I know it is wrong, but crazy and hot has a bad effect on me. Isi flamed this passion of mine and showed me how wonderful crazy woman can be.
She charged me from behind with the fist, and I sidestep to dodge. She attacked with a kick and I just tilt my hips to dodge it. She attacked me several times, I just kept walking and dodged her attack. Then suddenly I felt danger, but I couldn't understand where it came from. But then I started to fly to Hisoka.
"She must have used her Nen Power, Bungee Gum," Crow told me as I was flying towards Hisoka.
'What the hell is Bungee Gum?' I exclaimed with my inner voice. Why didn't you tell me earlier? And when did I hit by it?
"Hisoka is Transmuter. She changed the properties of her aura to gum. It is sticky and can extend. Because it is not an attack dangers you, your Observation Haki ignored it." Crow explained.
'I feel like, the force that pulls me is on my chest, but why I can't see it?' I was about to reach to Hisoka, I had to get rid of that damn thing before it was too late.
"You practiced Ren only little bit, but you should be able to use it. Gather all your aura in your eyes to use Gyo," said Crow.
Ren, Enhance, was focused on outputting a larger amount of aura than Ten. For example, using a little bit amount of gas to have a steady fire was Ten, using all gas to create explosive fire was Ren. If Ten was considered purely defensive, then Ren could be regarded as its offensive counterpart, even though it also granted to the user vastly enhanced defensive abilities.
Gyo, Focus is an advanced application of Ren by which a Nen user gather a larger than normal portion of their aura into one specific body part. It increases the strength of that one body part but leaves the rest of the body more vulnerable. Gyo is most often used in the eyes, allowing a Nen user to see aura and Nen constructs concealed with "In" as well as traces of aura that so faint that they might go unnoticed otherwise.
In this case, Hisoka also used "In" to hide her aura from my eyes.
"In" Conceal is an advanced form of Zetsu used to render one's aura hidden, effectively concealing it. Unlike Zetsu, however, "In" does not stop the user's aura flow; instead, it hides it, making it impossible to perceive with any of the five senses or extrasensory perception. Thus, this technique is perfect for launching sneak attacks or laying traps, as it can conceal not only the user's presence.
Even with my strong senses, I could only felt that Hisoka's aura stuck to my chest because the force pulls me was on my chest. I gathered my aura to my eyes and used Gyo. I found out I was hit by her aura more than once. When I was about to reach her, I took out Seven kunai with the seal and threw them to air around the Hisoka. I wasn't adept at this technique, but I had no other choice at the moment.
I gathered all my Yin Chakra and circulated it in my body. Ghost Body! It was the ultimate Templar technique. Only strongest Templars were able to use this technique and turn their all body to Phantom form. It was harder than it sounds. Almost depleted all my chakra but I got rid of all of Hisoka's aura. Then I flashed to the kunai behind her and punched her from the back. I threw that kunai to air again and flashed to another one. Then once again. I did this until she was bleeding from her nose. Then I collected all my kunais to flash away.
Because she had strong Ren, I couldn't really hurt her yet, but it was enough for her to understand, she wasn't strong enough to beat me. I flashed away from that battlefield to open some distance away from that crazy woman. Then I started to walk to ship again.
"Why don't you kill her? She will be the pain in the ass if you leave her like this." Crow said when I was on my way to the ship.
'She will help to Kurapika with the Phantom Troupe, and I am going to need help when I take them down.' I said. I thought about it and decided to team up with Kurapika against the Phantom Troupe. All in all, they were evil.
When I arrived on the ship, I left a clone in my place and flashed away to practice Ren. This phase of the exam was going to take 5 days, and I finished it in half a day.
To practice Ren, one must use all his Ren. It was like practicing stamina. One had to use all before having more stamina. I released all my Ren, over and over again. When I depleted all, I lied on the ground and rested. Then I did the same thing once again.
After five days we were taken to the civilization. There were 10 applicants left, and the fighting system they have decided one was the most stupid I have ever heard. The fighting order was a mess, and the one who was going to lose was the one who would lose to all others. The one admits defeat would go the next round, while the one win would be considered to pass the exam. The rest of the applicant would all pass the exam. Also if anyone killed their opponents he would be eliminated, and rest of the applicants would pass the exam.
I was last in fighting order and started to wait. The first fighters were Gon and ninja named Hanso. Gon was the main character of the Original Series, and he was a little boy. Yet whatever Hanso did, for example breaking his arm or torturing with too many other ways, he did not admit defeat. When he has fainted, the other fights carried on. Hisoka fought against Kurapika and whispered to his ear something, then admitted defeat.
The fights were going on, some lost, some admitted defeat. When it was time for Killua and man with needles on his face, something weird happened. The man took all the needles from his face, and his appearance changed dramatically. With needles, he had potato face and almost bald head. When he took them out, he grown hair and his face were handsome.
Killua called him brother and the man told to Killua, he hasn't what it takes to be a hunter. He threatened Killua with killing Gon and using Ren. I didn't surprise after he used Ren because obviously, that weird ability with needles was Nen power. Killua was affected by his brother and killed someone when it wasn't his fight, and we all passed the exam.
When we were briefed about being a hunter, the feinted Gon came to ask about Killua. By gripping Killua's brother arm and exerted immense power. Without using Nen willingly, broke a Nen users hand. I didn't care about any of these and started to fly to my next destination after the briefing.
Shalnark told me to go and create my Nen before I return to the Phantom Troupe in that place. Heaven's Arena!
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I am going to use a lot of Nen power for enemies, if you have an idea, share it with me in the comments. Thank you.
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