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I arrived at the building where Hunter Exam is going to hold. It may be something to exaggerate in this world to arrive at this place, but it was easy for me. I just used my Devil Fruit a few times, and all the doors were opened for me.
It is been three days since I left Shalnark at the airport. After I told her to keep her boobs away from me, she just smiled and kissed me on the cheek. Scary women... Scary women are everywhere.
The rest of the trip was easy. Shalnark lend me some money, even though I didn't need it. I had lots of gold I gathered from One Piece World. I also had too much currency, valid in that World, but I gave half of it to Garp and the other half to Nojiko. Garp had to run all Black Wing, and even though it was making a great sum of money, still Garp might need more.
The other half I gave for Nojiko was for my secondary project. Bringing Orphans to the World. Black Wing and Nojiko were working on this together, gathering all Orphans and making them responsible individuals.
There was a system, allowing World Wanderer to exchange it for the next World's currency. But the system belonged to the lackey of the Shop God, and they were taking too much commission. And I sure wasn't going to make Shop God any richer.
Shop God has his own gains, by giving related currencies instead of items. If I had financial troubles, he would start to give me money, but because I had more than enough, he never put money on the reward.
After I arrived in the place, there was hardly anyone. I was given the emblem with #7. After almost half day, the last applicants arrived. They were protagonists of the original series, Gon, Leorio, and Kurapika. I was really surprised because usually there would be a different gendered character. But all were male as they were in the original series. I guess what was carrying this series was, bromance.
"The best one!" said Crow happily.
'How do you find time to watch this stuff?' We were doing stuff almost all the time. I never have time to sit down and read anything, how can you find time to follow these stuff?
"When you do your pervert things, I shut the connection and gather information. And since you are the biggest pervert ever, I have a lot of times to watch all this." Crow scolded me.
'Well, it is not my fault if gals love me. I am a man. I have to answer when duty calls. Otherwise, I would fail all fallen comrades. Do you want me to betray them, soldier?'
"No, sir! Wait, stop this tricky stuff. You know I get hyped quickly." said Crow embarrassed.
'Yes, yes. I know you are a big fangirl. Who did you fall this time? Kurapika lad's story was interesting, you like him?' I teased Crow more.
"There is a boy named Killua, he is so strong yet help Gon with everything, ignoring even his well being. He is really super duper cool. And-"
'Hold it right there! I was teasing you. I am not interested.' This Crow was laziest and weirdest system ever. As I was sitting on the ground, minding my own business, a fat man came to offer me a beverage. I wasn't going to drink it, but when Crow told me the man was known as noobie crusher, and the beverage was poisoned with strong aperient, I decided to pay him back.
I used my Zhengi Telepathy to tell him "Hear my Edict! Run naked in front of everyone for five minutes." The man undressed and started to run, and I started to watch other applicants. I didn't really know any, except some significant, Crow told me about.
I noticed a woman look like a jester. She was tall and had light skin and a fairly toned physique. Her attire was adorned with symbols of the card of decks on the front and back torso, she had face paint of a star on her right cheek and a teardrop on her left cheek. She was the Hisoka, the most dangerous man in the original series. But she was looking beautiful with her pink hair, bare stomach and developed ample bosoms.
When a man bumped her on the shoulder and walked away, something amazing happened. Just a few minutes later, the man's arms started to scatter like petals falling from the tree in the autumn. The Jester turned to the man and said, "How esoteric! His arms seem to have become flower petals. Do take care. When you bump into someone, you really should apologize."
'Did she just used Nen?' I couldn't help but asked Crow, what the hell was that attack. I didn't see anything, even when I was watching her all the time.
"I am not sure either. It doesn't fit with the description recorded about her Nen power." Crow said.
'What do you mean? Her powers alto altered with this world?' It was logical. Nen powers were mostly related to the personality. As Crow told me a few days earlier, even with the Nen type, it could be deducted by person's personality. Giving her gender was different from the original series, it would be logical to have different Nen power.
"No, it is not like that. He did the same thing in original series too. But, Hisoka was always weird, it may be her secondary Nen talent. As I told you earlier, everybody can create secondary, even tertiary Nen type." What Crow said started to worry me. I always learned the techniques, I never created them. But now, I had to create my own power, and it was scaring me.
After some time, door closed and everybody started to look around to see if there was an overseer. A few minutes later, a clock started to ring, and the wall beside me rose to the ceiling. There was a weird man, staying with the ringing clock in his hand. The man had a purple suit, lilac hair, and no mouth. He had a thin mustache, but no mouth at all. Still, he was able to talk.
He declared that the hunter exam started and asked us to follow him and we did. As the time went by, he started to accelerate, and I was following him from some distance. I could just mark him or any of the applicant to teleport later, but in case of they seal the space, I decided to follow him. With my means, this was walking in the park anyway.
After a few hours, we climbed to the stairs and arrived in the open misty valley. All the applicant with some exceptions were panting heavily. I stood there to look around. The misty valley was filled with different kind of life forms. There were too many, and all them were giving me wild vibe.
When we were about to start another marathon, a man came out from the mist and warned us about the overseer. He said that overseer was fake, and he was the real overseer. Giving his appearance, it was making sense, but I could feel both of them with Haki. The one warning us was a monster, and the one brought us was human. After some time, some of the applicants followed the monster in human appearance and vanished in the mist.
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