Sorry for dropping Red Wings everyone who will still read this. I've been writing this on the go and failed to keep do everything right, or even acceptable for myself.
Also writing a dungeon was a stuoid choice haha the dungeon needed to be big, but I fucked it up, so everything went south.
But hey, that's all the bad things. For the good things... I'm going to start something new, and do it better than I did with Red Wings. And honestly, I think that the way of power is more interesting and original too.
It's called Monster Haven, and there's 1 chapter online now. Although there isn't anything substantial in this chapter yet, it will give you an idea of what it'll be like.
I'm not planning on writing another chapter for another 2 to 3 weeks, I'm going to build up chapters, and release them at a 3ish chapters a week, because I noticed that I really can't do 7.
Only for those who read it here I'll give a quick peek at how the people of this world cultivate.
The cultivators of this world will be called Creators, as they create a world inside of their souls. This world is created by a wish or desire that will create a world seed, this happening after someone turns 10 or before someone turns 5 is almost unheard of.
This world grows with his creator, and the creator grows with his world. Growing a world is done through expanding on ones wish.
Imagine a kid wanting to protect his mother when he sees her being harassed by a strange man, he could get a world and the power that comes with it to do so. But it can come in many ways.
His world might give him a strong exterior to stand in between the attacker and his mom. or he might be able to summon chains, and when he binds the attacker, the attacker gets locked up in his world.
I personally thought this was a fresh idea. So I hope you'll take a look if you liked Red Wings. (And you probably did if you're still reading this hehe)
With kind regards,
Sander-Oneesan