Back when I created this chapter I had the full intention of continuing the book and writing more chapters in my spare time. And for a few weeks I did that. I wrote a few chapters for this book, but recently, I've lost interest in writing this story. It felt very unorganized to me even though I had a decent plot for it. A few dozen chapters ago, I messed up with sequencing of the book.
A certain thing in the story was meant to happen later in the story, but I accidentally included it earlier on and decided to wing it from there. This was a really horrible idea since it seemed out of place to me while writing. (I'm referring to the Ice Phoenix) I had plans to include a pet, but I introduced it too early into the story. If you've noticed the ice Phoenix in the past chapters, it seems really out of place and is mostly just a background character.
Also the fact, that I improved a lot from the beginning of the story to now is making me dislike the book. I sometimes have to look back at my old chapters for certain things that I've mentioned and each time I look back, I notice a few mistakes which I never had the time to fix. It bothers me to leave the chapter with obvious mistakes.
I guess this is the problem with posting drafts of a book online. If I fail then there's usually no going back. I don't think I'll ever pick up this book again. These are just my thoughts. I love each and every person who took their time to read this book and I wish you great fortune in whatever other book you enjoy reading. ~Leaf