Ziyun

France

This story is very interesting. Two siblings got split up because of some family issues. They meet again at work. This story is very new to me. I usually see some translated stories about some transmitting or going to their own past. I’ve also read about a cold hearted male and stuff.

Hello here is the author review!Anyways, I am sorry for keeping you all waiting, but unfortunately I have lots of personal issues to deal with first. Don't worry, I will make sure to be back with a new chapter after that long hiatus at the end of june. Thank you all for your support.

Well, I didn't realize this was finally posted until today :thinking: Anyways I believe this story has quite a lot of potential can't wait for new chapters.

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H1 Z1... Just wanted to support you ^_^. Will update the review once chapters stack up.

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Overall a cool story, characters are well thought of and the descriptions used by the author/translator paint a pretty vivid picture of the whole literary universe. English is pretty smooth and easy to understand.

I would like to say that it's going to be a good story but I guess its too early to conclude besides it has only two chapters. I'll give, a more comprehensive review once this has been updated.

idk I just like Ziyun so I'll give this a 5. Ziyun is a good kiddo

God the comment has to be 140 characters frick. idk what to say 

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