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Follow the beginning of a new era for humanity... Or rather, the continuation of an era long lost and hidden from everyone for millennia...
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I don't know what you expect by coming here, but give it a chance and please give me feedback on the chapters, especially the first one. That will tell me whether I should continue or not. It's quite discouraging not to see people commenting and giving ideas. I tried three other books, for which I even got the opportunity to be contracted after just a few chapters, but the lack of feedback was really discouraging. I want to do my best and be recognized for it, so I hope for your help and a little push to get started. I'm kind of stuck. And one more thing, my native language is Portuguese, not English. So there may be a lot of mistakes when switching to English, I'm sorry for anything and I really hope to fix this soon, I'm not very fluent in English either. And what do you think about me posting the chapters in Portuguese and English?

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Table of contents

Volume 1